Reviews for Serpentine
lkdaswani chapter 6 . 1/24/2018
omg omg! please update soon! I cant wait to read more of this story. I love how Harry is portrayed in this. I do wonder when will he realise that Tom is not really his father and that he is a potter( will that reveal come?) also curious how this will be a HPDM... looking forward.
bellaandbeastlove chapter 6 . 8/14/2017
Very nice story. Can't wait to find out more, please update soon
Gurgaraneth chapter 1 . 4/24/2017
Love it update sn
1sunfun chapter 6 . 5/12/2015
Nice.
babyvfan chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
This should be interesting
SerpensPrincess chapter 6 . 9/7/2014
Wow harry and draco will get together right greats o far can't wait till next update
daisy.tya chapter 6 . 6/2/2014
-_- the troll was not in this day , Harry go to the mirror the days when Gryffindor win the Quidditch match
ElectraX12 chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
i hope harry doesn't get in too much trouble for losing the Stone...On another note i have to say that i really enjoyed this chapter and have so far immensely liked this fic. I can't wait to read more ;)
PhantomhiveMocca chapter 6 . 10/17/2013
i will wait for you
so you better quickly updated
ok ?!
natsuki23 chapter 6 . 9/15/2013
Please update soon, it's too good to end!
RavenLilyLuna chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
Nice story can't wait to read more
johnny.vick chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
omg omg more more please more
n.harkin.9 chapter 6 . 12/13/2012
please write more i realy want to know what happens next and how harry delivers the news to voldy/his dad!
shaherochigo103 chapter 6 . 9/17/2011
In this chapter you jumped around when he first went into the trap door it was the night of the quidich match and when he came out it was the night of th troll attack its a good story but you need to stay consistant
Nenefee chapter 6 . 5/30/2011
It's quite pathetic that you don't even keep up with your own story line.

When the troll was in the dungeons as a distraction, Harry went to the 3rd floor corridor to try out methods to get past fluffy. Then suddenly it was his attempt to get at the stone. BUT you have not only a quidditch match in between but also Harry's success at altering his brother's memories - so, what's it supposed to be?

Also, in the first chapter it is said Harry's eyes are Voldemort's kind of green, and where instrumental in Voldemort recognizing him as his son; now, suddenly, it's the colour of his mother's eyes - again, what's it supposed to be?
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