Great work. I love it.

You like sabrina the teenage witch to? Awesome! Great story so far!

this is such a good idea. write more Sabrina stuff.

way good

i really liked it a lot! it was a really clever way to end it, especially cuz drell made salem a cat and sabrina made drell a cat. that was pretty cool. great job, and awesome revenge on libby!

What? No Skippy?

Very, very cute! Some parts were a bit boring, but they led to some very exciting scenes! WTG on a great story!

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1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8- [9] -10

NINE-EXCELLENT!

Gusse what? You've writtin another cool story and i updated The 'things you'd never hear on Smallvile' Reality. Please check it out!

One of the better Sabrina fanfics I've read. The storyline was imaginative, and you accurately captured the show's characters and whimsical atmosphere. My one suggestion would be that you go back and, through some of the new features on , fix the chapters with extended blocks to make them easier to read. In short, a job well done.

Good story!

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Very Godd

Good story! Yes, the ending did suck but... Well, I probably won't read ur next one but keep it up!

Yay! It's great when you get to tell friends that your a witch!

Signed:

Princess B.

Nice, nsal! This is niddyz here. I think you did a great job. Keep on writing.

Very good story, more or less believable. As far as your writing, I can't find much wrong with it! :) Maybe add a little more detail in chapter nine. The capture of Drell - especially sneaking into the fortress - seemed (in my opinion) a little TOO easy. But there again, it helped keep the story from bogging down. You'll have to draw your own conclusion on that one, I guess.

It would be a big help if you got to work dividing chapters 3 and 5 into multiple paragraphs. While you're at it, maybe check over your spelling and grammar? Don't get me wrong - it's a lot better than most writers', but everybody makes mistakes.

All minor points - apart from that... *shrug ...what can I say? It's great. Good job. :D