Wow I loved this. Every chapter was a new adventure! I like your OCs and I appreciated how well you did Eowyn

This was a brilliant story from beginning to end!

I loved all the characters. The OCs were interesting, well written, and believable, both the evil and the awesome ones. :) I loved the portrayal of the familiar characters as well. Aragorn was especially perfect somehow. When he ran into the hall without an escort and greeted Eowyn like that I nearly broke down in tears. It was so totally and beautifully Aragorn. And I just started screaming when I realized the part Legolas was going to play at the end. Ok, if this sounds awkwardly worded I’m just trying not to give too many spoilers. It’s hard!

Eomer, Lothiriel, Erika, and Elfhelm made wonderful companions on this journey. I am so glad happiness is theirs now, as well as Eowyn’s and Faramir’s. Faramir certainly deserves it. I felt so bad for him! And Eowyn too after all she suffered!

Fast paced, entertaining, terrifying, thrilling, delightful, and all other appropriate adjectives... this was a truly awesome story. :) Thank you!

Too sweet! Gosh, I love this couple. This story was great. So witty. You're a great writer, and this was a great story. Thanks for writing!

Why does Eomer think that Ceorl would know that the child is Eomer's? If she flees Rohan right after Eomer's death, the child could be anyone's

I'm glad for Breda

I like the jealousy twist between Lothiriel and Erika, but I think considering the circumstance Lothiriel is being a bit too jealous.

I am really glad Erika did not die yet.

I think Creol is being too obvious. Lothiriel and Elfhelm will never fall for it or at least they should not

The plot points with Galwyn, Erika and Creol seems very complicated, but I love Eowyn's approval of Lothiriel

Beautiful, dark but very good story...

Oh, what a tangled web we weave... :-P. It was so much fun to keep up with who knew how much and how they knew what they did throughout this story. Thanks so much for all the hard work that went into this. And, thanks for your thoughtfulness in splitting the last chapter, I appreciate it... :-)

just lovely. Thanks for the story.

I really enjoyed this. You did an incredible job of bringing Eomer and Lothiriel out in their characters, I will have to go looking for more stories of these two although I don't know that anyone will capture your style and grace with them.

Great story line and the Grima family was creepily perfect in their insanity.

I hope you write more, there need to be children for these two and storie about the House of Rohan's King and Queen.

sidh

Wow where has this story been? I have only just discovered it and I thought I had read all of the E/L pairings out there. This was fantastic! Thank you for such a great read. :-)

This was an enjoyable read. Surprisingly, I liked Elfhelm and Erika's relationship just as much as the Eomer and Lothiriel's.