I have enjoyed your story but your Dumbledore is a condescending prick and Harry is a complete pussy, he would not have stood for that crap excuse of his after another student put Hermione in a coma.

Brilliant stuff. Well done!

It's called a duel, not a dual...

I haven't read this entire story yet but I just want to say that I have never ever liked Severus Snape’s character as he is mean, rotten, dour, nasty among other things, what lily saw in him as just a friend is certainly beyond me but personally if I had been in Lily’s shoe when she tried to help him after James and his Maruader’s made him look foolish is understandable but for him to insult her is unforgivable in anybody’s book but the thing that really makes him a truly sorry excuse for a wizard is that he stalked Lily and even had the audacity to after becoming a Death Eater and telling his ”Master” about a ”prophecy” of a child that will be born that will defeat him (Voldemort) and even going so far as having the sickening thought of asking for Lord Voldemort to save Lily but kill Harry and his father James. Snape is lower then dragon shit.

damn.. thats geting annoying... really,

ouch... poor Harry, apparently the girlfriend had the same feelings for the best friend.. and everyones knows it he has a crush on her but Harry didn't realise that..

yeah.. he's just doesn't get a bloody thing about women does he! Harry i mean, poor thing... his anxiety is beyond himself!
and wow turns out Neville has a crush on Hermione too?! what a twist..

Snape?.. why i'm not surprised? though.. as much as a jerk Severus is... i did quite enjoying it, his antics and their confrontation... lolol, sorry but i find this rather amusing,.. poor Harry!
and Draco?! its not cool man.. yet his reactions fit so well,

bwahahaha.. Harry! my God!, i thought you were the Chosen One!, what happened to you?!

dang!, why did i not reading this sooner...

It made me cry too.

What a cry baby ! I can't stand all this angst and self pity! Don't really care what happens to him but Hermione deserves better. Good luck in the future and cut back on the A/Ns, it's heard to figure out where they end and the story began. Better luck with your next story!

You have to do part 2!

What I really, really love about this story is the fact that you've managed to preserve the very best aspects of the door's personality. So many others give it SUCH a bashing, yet they forget it was actually quite a good character (except Deathly Hallows. Most of that one sucked for it).

Really good