I like the story but you ramble on to much about stuff everyone knows the back story of everyone in the Harry Potter universe

Wtf ending, and there was a typo where it said rally, instead of really.

Hi, I just wanted to let you know how brilliant this chapter was. One of my favourite parts was what Snape said. Everything he said really. About finding himself in a "grey" area, and watching everyone - I saw what an incredible spy he has been, and his understanding of life and people, I thought it was very well written. Almost wish we saw more of him in this story now I see how great you write him. I might have to check your other fics to see if any feature him. I also love Ron's part in this chapter as well, and how much he loves Harry and his family. I also feel like I should apologise for not reviewing as much as I could have. I'm sure there are a lot of people out here like me who just want go on to the next chapter and see what happens without reviewing. But we should. Thank you for sharing this story.

Aw I love what Harry said, it was heartbreaking, I'm glad Ginny hugged him and hopefully they sort things out. Great chapter!

Very good!

...the first word that comes to mind when I think of these Harry...Pathedic! Great Plot! Can't what to read why he did what he did and what not.

Okay, Ginny is beginning to scare me. She's obsessed with Harry taking over for Dumbledore and leading the Order and saving the Wizarding world once again.

Can't she give it a rest, for Merlin's sake?

Other than Obsesso-Girl, this is a pretty good story. I'm liking it a lot.

Jo F.

Excellent story. Just a thought, I thought Ron worked for the Ministry, and did not play Quidditch? Maybe I just missed that he did that too. Anywho, good job. Love the ending with Snape.

Loved it! This is by far the best story I've read. You are a great writer. Keep up the fantastic writing and I can't wait to read more of your work.

uhm... interesting story and your write well...

however I don't think that even Harry is thick enough to feel guilty for years and into maturity about deaths he was not responsible for...

oh and could you have been MORE cliche with that Ginny?

excellent fic, favorite line ; 'Look at me! I don't even have to watch when I fight a Dark Lord! I'm so brilliant' Blah, blah, blah...

very good chapter

i'm exctied for the duel, and it likes like ron and hermie get their chance to fight after all!

didn't see that coming either.. poor harry, his life really does suck

wow i didn't see that one coming.