MEGAN!

Bree should never have given me your profile...this is what I've been doing all afternoon. But that's cuz it's that good! Mari and Jack absolutely crack me up...and you even snuck the shoe throwing incident in there! I love it! Talk to you soon!

Love ya!

Please update these. Do you have any idea how annoying it is to just get interested in a story and bam you come to the end and it's not the end. It's very aggravating, and you know I'm NOT a patient person.

wow. this was definatly worth the wait! (looks faintly guilty at lack of own updates) keep going luv, were doing well.

see ya freak

*PLUG* ReViEw My FiC CaLlEd JaCk JiLl AnD tHe CuRsE oF tHe ElEmEnTs *PLUG*

"Big bats"...LOL.

Hey, I like this story. It's so much better done than most "Jack's daughter" stories. Mari is belivable and Jack is in character. Good job!

Wow, this is great! I like the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter, this is fantastic! Excellent use of words, too. I'm usually not "intellectually stimulated" by fanfic vocabulary, and this was a nice change. Great job! Mari is a well-developed likeable character, even if the thing with her and Will was a bit...superfluous. I also like the use of lines from the movie. At first, I didn't, but now I do. And I like the fights. Very realistic. The whole idea is very original, you don't come across good fanfic like this much anymore.

I think I've worshipped you enough for one night. Good luck on the next chapter!

~Amethyst

good keep up the good work and update soon!

Jade

bwahahahaha... poor will. itll probably end up something like... will: look over there

everyone else: what? *looks round whilst jack etc sneak in the back*

sorry, but it made me laugh. good chappie babs! keep it up!

lol. :D me likes, alot! more puh-lease!

Jess

Short and sweet, the best stuff takes time. Read on Jackie the Druid, Mari is far from being a "mary sue", you shall see.

I love where this is headed! I hope you get time to update soon! Love ya, Big Sis!

Tis awesome. Thou hath me hooked!

Hey girl! Fantastic story. You are one of my favorite writers and I am not just saying that to get brownie points lol. You know I love you mucho. Keep writing about Jack and maybe one day he will relinquish all rights and you can own him. Anything's possible! Sorry that it has taken me so long to read ur stories but I can say that it was worth the wait. From your Sam!

This has certainly piqued my interest.

Mari is still a little too "mary-sue" for my taste, and I wish she had a more troublesome character flaw than "stubborness" but all and all, good job.

I like the way Norrington is being displayed, and the very slowly budding interest between him and Mari.

Jack, Will, and Liz are very much in character and you have been doing a wonderful job with them.

Good work so far and very interesting storyline.

Probably the best and truest likeness to Captain Jack as I've read so far, and I like the storyline! WHEN ARE YOU WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER? I'm hooked!

heh heh heh... loving the flying wig. and picturing the look on jacks face... heh heh heh...

see ya ( a very amused) freak