Interesting i like your little Aya and Yohji games. That was a great introducting line, caught me immediately, and the way you played it out was pretty good. Awesome one-shot

Hi

first of all, I'd like to say a big "Thank you" for your long and detailed comments. I really appreciate your taking the time to review, made my day ;D.

Just had to take a peek at your stories... I loved this one. It's a way of exploring Aya's and Yohji's relationship that is rare, but you did it beautifully. I loved the tangible emotion, the quiet reasoning.

I must confess I'm not particularly fond of using "green-eyed one" to describe Yohji, it also seemed slightly off considering your writing style, being a bit bland.

This is perfect, I think my favourite piece of the whole fic - it gives the story a special depth, with a slightly darker touch.

Thanks for sharing!

Hey, VL ... I haven't written anything in a while, and was checking reviews, and I noticed you asked why I don't have many reviews. Answers are 1) I'm relatively new; and 2) I don't review for other stuff unless I think it's good... I don't like "" reviews.

This is really good, and I really mean it, and I'd love to see you continue it. Someday I'm going to stop writing AxY in mushy situations and make them fight; because I love the way it's entirely possible for them to rub eachother the wrong way...I think that's what makes them cool, yanno? Keep writing, pal; and I hope you'll keep reviewing my stuff because your comments are REALLY appreciated (constructive grammar criticism, for example *smiles*) CIAO!

Excellent.

Your writing rocks and I love the idea of this story, how fighting doesn't end things. I hope you do another chapter that expands on that idea.

Be a good vampire and update another chapter please!

Will you? say you will, pretty ph-leaase *_*

This is very interesting i'd love to read more about it

byes

wow! i don't know you (of course, your the one who wrote that perfection!) but i think your fic is kinda dark and really facinating!

do u intend on doing a second chapter cause i really love them (aya/yohji) and the way u made them act (i easily give them credit, their behavior seems natural to me!)

this piece is a jewel Vampire Louis!

bye

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