I liked it because of the word usage but I felt that there were far too many spelling errors and they interrupted the flow.

Mark A, almost a P but I liked the ship so I cut you a break.

i love your writting

ngrljk. This makes me feel ANGST. And such a pretty shiny angst that I may feel for days.

Anyway, I loved it, and adore you for your 'style and flow'. It's like poetry, almost. Or it just makes me think of it like that because it's ohsopretty _ You really got into Dean's head, but not overly, you know? The way that makes a reader feel everything that the characters are feeling.

I'm probably just babbling nonsense, but I really just wanted to say that I loved this and hope you continue to write, and all that stuff ;)