Reviews for The Custodian of the City of Fear
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
I do rather like Dreadmoon's...er...suave cutthroatedness? I'm not sure how to describe that. lol In any case, I enjoy him.

Also, I was greatly amused by Nimbus' style of speech. :3 I love people who talk like that.
ToaVeka chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Oh, so excellent! And here was me thinking that Natasha was an excellent writer. I have quite a few fancharacters myself, the oldest, Fastrack began as a Mary-Sue, but nowadays, I THINK she's just a normal character (Okay, so she does have alot of Sueish qualities still, but I do try to emphasize the weaknesses she has, and give reasons for her other ones) Someday, I may beg you to review her and a few others to make sure they ain't Mary Sues.
Sweetfires chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
As a previous reviewer has mentioned, this is a side of Dreadmoon we don't see anywhere else. Starscream sees him as over eager and young in Worlds Away, and we don't see any SneakyBastard!Dreadmoon in Waiting for Starscream. I have to say, Dreadmoon is a character that grows on you, and once he has, he's hard to get rid off.

Also, I'm falling in love with him. He's such a cutie!

*runs away*
Spinfirestorm chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Another great fic from the creator of Cutter and Insecticon queen. _

Is there going to be anoth Insecticon fic soon? It's been a while since you wrote one, they'll be begining to think you don't love them any more.
Soryu chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
A really good fic, Wayward! Congratulations!

Finally another Dreadmoon story to read, eh? And from the time before Starscream and Dreadmoon's first meeting, too.

Y'know, one that has never looked at Dreadmoon's profile wouldn't know how he was like, and this fic finally covers it! He's really a good manipulative Decepticon! My only regret is that, with me being italian, I never red the comics, so I feel like I am missing an half of the story (btw, write the comic number from where you took inspiration for the fic as a post-note or something, at least those who have it would be happy!).

Looking at Dreadmoon's profile, I also liked his initial motives to interact with Starscream. You hadn't showed them in 'Worlds Away', and then he was already Starscream's second-in-command in 'Stormworld'. Could you do a fic to cover this? Yes, I know that you have other fics to do and a life to live, but when you're this good, you're bond to have these kind of requests! Oh, and if you don't want to post the fic here, just say it. I would gladly read it on your site (am I getting a little too hopeful already?). Well, until your next wonderful fic, then! Bye!