great story.

This series was the first fanfic that I read. It is really sad that it has been given up half way

Look... this series is in my top 5 Favorites. I see that you are still writing fanfics, but you haven't updated this series in 5 years. I think there is a lot of potential, especially with the recent manga revelations (Madara w/ Sharingan and Rinnegan, Naruto "taming" Kyuubi, Kabuto's evolution and usage of Edo Tensai to bring back killed Akatsuki members, ect.) It wouldn't take much tweaking to "merge" the cool manga shit with your storyline. Anyways, I really wish you would continue this series to atleast a solid ending.

I must say, I have always loved this story and I finally got back to reading it. My only gripe is that Naruto and Garra, though really Naruto in particular, is a little TOO strong. At the same time Sasuke is using his Curse Seal a bit too regularly, though I can see the need. I want him relying more on strategy again because right now, he may be the weakest of the 4. Still, your development of your supporting characters is superb. But can't Sasuke get a break?

over three years... have you really just given up on the whole thing?

narusaku and inosasuhina

mah...have you discontinued this fic?you have not update in ages!oh PLEASE don't discontinue this fic!i'm so god-damn happy for discovering this series...no romance so far!YES!so much action and adventure!a vicarious experience for almost all chapters and i find myself laughing alot of times at humorous attempts!please update soon!PLEASE...please don't say you've stopped writing for this fic...PLEASE!

Great story left it off on a cliffhanger though...

Please keep going! (Oh, and I think your beta sucks. Way too many errors.)

awsome story can't wait 4 the next chapters and book. how come u haven't update in like... almost 2 years? any way i hope u update soon! :)

PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU, PLEASE WRITE MORE, IF YOU EVER DO ANYTHIGN PLEASE WRITE MORE, THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY! i LOVE IT SO MUCH, it really is thought out, i mean to think of skills, and bloodline traits you really are a master at this, please write more

THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD AND THIS IS THE BEST STORY IVE EVER YOUR NUM.1 FAN AND AS WELL AS UCHIHA SASUKE. PLEASE WRITE A STORY BETWEEN ME AND SASUKE! PLEASE!

A good seqeul to the seqeul. You are a true master at this,

I've found both books 1 and 2 to be really interesting. Book 3 seemed to be following in the same path, unfortunately, it doesn't seem like you will be updating this any time soon. That's to bad, because I for one really enjoyed this story and had hoped for it to continue. I look forward to reading your other stories and can only hope that you might pick this story up again at a future time.

Have you lost the will to write this story? it's been nearly two years since your last update. Please continue at least finish this book.