Even though eating the frog wasn't your idea, it was really cute, and I like your style of writing

Hehe, this was so cute! ]

that was a great fic! very cute and fluffy!

Wow! That was beatiful! You have real talent, good job! Ron and Luna AND chocolate... the perfect fic.

That was the cutest thing EVER. I absolutly LOVE Ron and Luna ships. _ You're the best.

that was awesome ur a great writter, like REALLY good. you shouldn't make it a one shot, u should continue writting it. its great, two thumbs up!

a great idea and it was excellently written. good job

Wow! Great story, i really like it! I haven't read many Luna/Ron, so great job! I know this is only a one shot, but it would be great if you continued! _

~JessieRose~

WOW brilliant story

That was possibly the strangest thing I have ever read. Ron just can't help himself, I s'pose _x I can't judge the story properly because I'm not a Ron/Luna shipper, but it was amusing :D

AW this is an adorable one shot! so sweet, yet still really sensual without being gross, and a great idea, Im glad your friend let you borrow it!

write more chapters, cuz its a really good story and i want to keep on reading it. by the way, don't you think that luna would look kinda weird with a chocolate frog hangng from one ear and not the other?

well it was very interesting and different i like that lol and yea good looks

Wow.