Nice!

loved the use of lyrics! def gave some throwback chills reading it! i love me some hoobie

are yu ever gonna finish this one?

i started reading and following it when yu first started it annd i just now am rereading it and am completely crushed that there hasnt been anymore :/ please up date soooon 3

I haven't been able to pry myself away from this story. I'm rather sad that it hasn't been updated in so long. ):

can you add more on to this story

god story hope you update soon

Hey... This story is actually amazing and I've loved reading it. Is there any chance of it ever being finished? Do I have to beg? Please? Thanks for writing.

i love this story and cant wait to see what happens

Hey! I just reread this, and I still love it. Please ignore the unfairly harsh dribble of a 'review' below, and know that we love this story. It's really quite good, and I am positively entranced with the characters as you've written them.

The hints you leave throughout have me extremely intrigued, and I would love to know what you have in mind for the rest of the story. It would make my year (haha, New year's) if you updated, but I understand if you do not.

Waiting anxiously,

k{k}

Cool!

I think you should update this story D

great story i love it and i have a little news flash for lavender gaia or whatever it is first off athletes do have curves i play softball basketball soccer and track and i have very nice curves thank you very much and second fanfiction was made so people can change or make up a new stories with charcters from books or movies or tv shows and if people did it your way we would pretty much be writng word for word from J.K Rowling's books and also fanfiction get the meaning fiction okay sorry had to get that out cause i saw her review anyway great story hope you update soon it has been a while

Wow, this is a crazy, insane and WONDERFUL story so far. I noticed you haven't updated in years, and wondered if you could be inspired to do so because of all us reviewing/begging you to finish!

The "Lavender" reviewer was a BITCH. Obviously, she has no clue what the words "fan" and "fiction" mean and you should ignore her drivel.

You've only started to make the plot thicken. Please update! I'm sure there are MANY OF US waiting to read more. Good luck, and I hope to get a story alert from you.

i like it

Just wanted to pipe up and say I enjoyed re-reading this one again- love it if you continue but no worries if you don't- I know I have a stack of unfinished stuff that's been languishing for ages too ;-)

I also wanted to review in response to another review you got from Lavender Gaia. Don't let it get to you Angelique Blue. There any hundreds (if not thousands!) of readers who have gotten lots of pleasure reading your story, I know I have. The true beauty and fun of fanfiction is the freedom to use the characters and worlds that have already been created and that we love and let our imaginations fly with them. Sometimes characters end up evolving, or backdrops change but that's the FUN!

Lavender Gaia, fanfiction is many things to many people- it's escapism, it's expression, it's something creative and fun. I've read lots of fanfiction I don't prefer but that doesn't give me the right to abuse the writer. I just stop reading and find another story. Criticism can be constructive, yours wasn't, If you have an issue with the quality of work on you may want to join a community that strictly moderates its submissions. You might find it more in keeping with your standards, whether you would be accepted into their community however is questionable considering your treatment of aspiring authors.