Oh, awesome story!

This was a great way to explain natural things. Nice job! So added to my community.

This is a very good example of how a myth can explain how things come to be. As a fanfic myth, this story does a good job of taking a story we're all familiar with and putting in a few extra details to show us why something is the way it is. While the Persephone/Hades/Demeter angle is overdone, I enjoyed this one. One thing that would've been a good compliment would be if the trees were represented by the hamadryads that lived in them, rather than the plants themselves. Just an idea.

wow. rather insightful, in a mythological way

Less like Sophocles than the Brothers Grimm. Not that that's a fault: where do we think Ovid got all those Metamorphoses, if not from the fireside tales of ordinary folk?

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. So I would like you to take away your author's note; it doesn't belong. I'm so amazed you could add that much more to the story of Persephone.

This worked very nicely. It is told like the tales in mythology books, and without dialogue. It also works nicely with the reality of things and the folklores that a person could create about them. Nice piece.

Oh, this is absolutely, absolutely beautiful! I can't describe the sort of rapture that it throws people into!

I liked the idea of the story; the thought that even the trees would choose to side with a person.

And I love the Anti-Disclaimer ;) .

I read your story.

and guess what- i liked it too

you remind me of someone i know... even from the tone of your summary and all

I wouldn't have read it had it not caught something in my mind

I dunno

Since I read pretty much everything those who are kind enough to review for me write, i'm going to take a leap of logic and ask you to please not read my first story. the first ten chapters are awful and i'm doing a complete rewrite

It would be too much of a coincidence if you happened to actually BE the aforementioned acquaintence. But then, I'm not quite sure I believe in the idea of coincidences... so out of curiosity... does your first name happen to start with a H?

You don't have to reply.

By the by... I LOVE YOUR PENNAME!

*eep*

i'm done now

WindSPun