Honestly, not the best story I've ever read, but at least it has correct spelling and grammar...

I love the idea. the execution was too off for me. too many charactors were way ooc. couldnt get past chapter 14. but never fear, i wont give up. ill come back eventually

Good story

Hi!
uhm.. i had aquestion cause you write in chapter 12 that you cant use magic outside of hogwarts until you graduated and that hermione would never do that but a few chapters earlier you write that hermione uses her wand for the letter because when you go to year 6/7 {i dont know which one any more :)} ? it is very confusing..

have a nice day!
nice thing with Draco having an owl!
Xx Irene

tom riddle ever loved someone? that's quite hard to believe

its getting more exciting by every chapter

this is going out really nice but I don't understand why hermione haven't used her wand yet?
I really feel sad for both of them...

hermione why don't u just crucio your bastard of a father!

poor draco! I hope he gets the letter back soon

didn't Hermione have a wand?

Yay Harry!

This is one of the most poorly written fanfic's I've ever read and I don't know how I even managed to stomach the 17 chapters that I've read but I'll stop now. No character development, totally illogical plot and very uncharacteristic behaviour, and the so called love between Draco and Hermione is moving too fast. Plus, the dialogues suck. The idea itself is somewhat interesting but you've failed completely at bringing it to life. I'm sorry for being rude, I'm usually much more polite, but you've just butchered my otp so I've taken the liberty. I don't have anything against you as a person but you really should work on your writing

this was a great story

Good story! I've never read one with voldie being Hermione's dad before. Very interesting. You did a good job with it! :)

-Yvonne

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