Such a kick-ass story...I want you to update this, please. ;_;

I was so happy when I returned after all this time to re-read Culmination, and saw you have a sequel to it still in progress! o I swear you are the best fic writer EVER! And so insanely devoted! You've only gotten better with time, as well... In culmination there were a couple of scenes, including the sex scene, wich seemed a bit awkward and nearing the line of OOC (though not crossing that line, thanks to the deapth of your character development). There's none of that in the sequel from what I've read of it so far... and the sex scene was wonderful! Tasteful, yet still arousing, and very beautiful and meaningful. You're the best!

Anywho, I'm an artist who needs some practice doing comic book/manga art. I was wondering if you'd let me turn your beautiful fics into doujinshi? I'm going to do some pages for fan-art's sake eather way. If you like them, maybe we can make a little money off this selling doujinshi at conventions. Your work is so beautiful... Ah, and I'd keep complete blurbs of some of your beautiful narantions in the books instead of interpreting it all into images, because you give such tender insights into the fealings and thoughts of the characters that conventional comic book style scripting couldn't do your work justice, no matter what I do visualy. Anywho, I'll have some fanart up soonish. :) Keep up the mind blowing work!

OH HOLY SAINTS! I LOVE YOU! :death glomps you:

You deserve so much for creating such a wonderful story like this and keeping the characters so in tune with the game. The relationship between all of them is just...wow! The chemistry between the characters, even the ones not romantically involved with each other, is so REAL. You are really talented at manipulating the characters like you do.

And the storyline is interesting-I NEED TO KNOW WHAT FREAKIN' HAPPENS AND WHY THE HELL I-NO IS SUCH A B*TCH AND WHY...Well, you get the idea. You have woven an intriguing plot once again and I LOVE YOU FOR IT.

I wish I could draw or write well enough to contribute something to you, but I'm useless. :sobs and pitifully gives virtual cookies:

Your story KICKS ASS, your writing style totally ROCKS, I can't get enough! Please keep up the wonderful work!

Woot updated. Er I have nothing to really add other than great chapter!

Lol wow I wasn't expecting to see an update so soon o_o. Glad to see it. wow more drama.

Evil evil evil cliff hanger!

Ven-man and Venny XD Oh man~ Haha. That made me laugh out loud. And the scene with Bridget and Ky was so cute! Very endearing, and I really felt for poor Bridget. _ I loved how the maid just KNEW too. XD About Testament.

I was so excited to see an update! And it was definitely a good read. XD So does this mean you found your fic notes?

O_o Ho'sh*t. That last few flines were quite unexpected. I'm very glad you updated though. I love this fic. As well as Drawn. Such a good story. Both. I can't wait to see more.

My god, this story is amazing. Your writing style is captivating, the plot intriguing, the characters at their best. You are one talented writer. Absolutely brilliant.

_ I love this story so much! Good plot, good smut, everything a story needs. ;;

Hope you update soon, and have a cookie for all your hard work. -Hands a cookie- _;

More drama woot. T_T No Testament though. Ah well. Still a good action packed chapter.

My computer is DEAD, so when I got some time online using someone else's laptop, I was SO happy to find something good to read! Ahh, you're a savior. So much action in this chapter. Raven, Sol, Jam, Johnny, Dizzy~ I'm so in love with your writing. Hehe. Great, great details, and just-AHH, the action! *worships*

Crap. I read this a week ago. Crap... _;;

And you've already put up the next chapter? ...But I can't read it right now. CRAP. T_T

Anyway...

You really make me wanna slash Venom and Axl together, y'know that? XD;; I love that they're forming this nice lil friendship/camaraderie/thing. 3

Oh, I guess Faust's gonna keep hiding out in Paris? Not sure what else he could do, anyway...

OMG, Sol~! Yay~! :D I missed his sorry ass~ I liked his nostalgic yet vague thoughts, but they raise the question of why he hasn't been to China in (what feels like) so long...

...But Jam's here, too. Damn it. -_-;; (er, she's not my favorite character in the world... though her endings in GGX2 made me laugh...) Sol staring at her butt is kinda creepy to me, but his remark about her voice makes up for it. P

Wow, and the pirates are back, too? Jeez, how do all of these ppl end up in China at the same time as That Man and Raven and the Japanese colonists? Yes, that's my current theory for the Korean-ish ship, lol. I can't remember their exact plans of getting to Paris or the UN, though... Btw, is it your goal to have every character show up in this fic? Cause you've managed to fit everyone but Millia and Potemkin so far, I think. (Yeah, I'm not counting "dead" ppl like Justice, Kliff, and Robo-Ky. P) Oh, I guess Robo-Ky II and A.B.A., too, but their storylines don't really fit anywhere in here...

Er, back to the Jellyfish... Whoo, fight~! Raven does seem like the unnerving type of guy that likes to catch ppl off-guard. It kinda works with his appearance, ne? I like your ideas on his skills/techniques. Very nice. Poor Johnny, though... Raven's even harder to understand than I-No... I kinda doubt he can be killed by a katana, too...

-_-;; ...Jam. Just... Jam. Something's wrong with that girl's head, and you somehow managed to capture that. Go you. P And I already like your take on Sol from what I read in "Culmination," so it's all good in that respect, lol.

Without peeking, I'll go and guess that the next chapter has more of the China chaos, and maybe a short check-in on Ky or someone...

Oh, and please PLEASE don't let Jam get anywhere near Ky at any point. I fear for his safety. o_o;; Though I guess Testament and Bridget would be able to handle her... (coughandSolcough) 3

Woo you updated sooner than I thought you would. Great chapter.

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First thought: OMG DON'T KILL ME I KNOW I SUCK I'M SORRY PUT DOWN THAT FRYING PAN EEP.

Second thought: ...Why am I awake at this hour in the morning?

...Yeah. 6-_-;;

I didn't know I could look at a list of all the reviews I've ever written on this site, and besides some really dorky-aw-hell-did-I-really-say-that gushing, I found something interesting:

I've been reading Culmination and Thunder Falling for roughly a year and a half. Yay for your very likeable and addictive writing~

...But I haven't reviewed this fic since March. Ouch. Did I mention I'm sorry? :D?

Well, I've read Chapter 10, but I'm not going to leave a separate review, because quite frankly I can't remember what I would've said. The main thing I wanted to comment on last chapter was the time travel. I LOVE IT. (And I would give you a big Asian smiley face, but the lil carot-thingy messed up last time I tried to use it somewhere. T_T Woe.) The entire idea is like blunt foreshadowing. XD The tattered and I suppose bloody I-No stands out image-wise, not to mention the guys she brought along for the ride. P And a confused, "WTF?" Ky makes me happy, as well~

Okay, now on this chapter, I also read this a while ago, so just some brief comments... Maybe...

Poor Zappa. Poor, poor Zappa. At least Eddie and I-No are amusing. I guess the Austraian's seen enough freaky stuff to not be scared of them... S-ko wanting to kill Axl is kinda random to me, though. o_o; Yeah, confused on that one, lol.

I can sympathize with Ky's policemen. XD Ky on one of his psycho-obsessed rampages is enough to scare anyone...

Those tea cups sound strangely familiar... P Aw, Ky and Testament made up... And just as I predicted (threatened) in another review, they get to have make-up sex. XD Muaha...

Ooh, seme Tesu this time? Yay~! 3 I have to admit... I like this "second time" more than the first. I'm not a fan of desperate, fast-and-forceful lemon scenes. I understand the situation in Culmination kinda called for it, I just mean in general. This time around, it's more calm than needy, lol. A lil short, but that's fine. I just like Testament being seme. XD But now you've made me curious to know who else has made Ky be the uke... How evil of you. -_-;;

I'm glad Ky and Tesu have come to a truce on the Venom issue. ...Though I'm sure something big will happen later where Ky will want to kill Venom again... Vengeful child, isn't he? P Wonder where Faust, Venom, and Axl ran off to, anyway... They've got all sorts of ppl looking for them... Who will get to them first? Oh the suspense~!

...I really shouldn't be awake right now. Ick. -_-;;

Well, I haven't read the next chapter yet, and won't be able to for a few days... (will be out of town Saturday night through Monday afternoon or night)

Le sigh. Maintenant, je suis tres triste.

And why did I break out in French?

Ah, well... G'night. P

Ohh! Yay, more characters XD Getting hectic now, isn't it? And damn your characterization never fails to impress me.

Sol cracked me up. I LOVE your Sol. And I love the idea of him getting nostalgic over things as simple as cheap Chinese food. And it usually IS when he's minding his own business that the world starts falling apart again. Poor guy. XD Oh well. That's why I love him, he's so brusque.

Jam was a nice addition this time too. For some reason I've always had a soft spot for her character. I kept hearing her accent when I was reading her dialogue, and I sympathized with Sol when he winced at the whistle. XD My niece can get that loud and high-pitched and it hurts.

Axl and Venom are sticking together! Yay XD For some reason, I just love how they interact around each other.

OH, and the fight with Johnny and Raven! In mid-air! AHH, the action! *fangirls* It's so exciting XD I can visualize it all so beautifully! I LOVE your descriptions. You're so creative, too, with the action scenes and how they're laced into the plot. So, so, so good. I love this fanfic so much T_T