Reviews for Attraction
merissala chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
STORY HIGHLIGHTS OF MOST MOST FAVORITE PARTS:

“yeah and it went out his nose, so I was like eww, that’s gross! Where the hell do you come up my ass! Leave, Chotarou alone, you flippy flops. I can’t believe I failed my first wild ride? Yup, Gakuto’s like that especially when he sucks! What the hell does he’s doing? ”

WOW, that sounded really awkward. But hyoutei's amusing nonetheless. I Love them! :D

“Come back here you bendy bitch! I’m not done with you yet!”

“Shishido-san!”

“Gekkoukujyo...”

“Usu.”

Then someone snored. Sanada promptly burst out laughing.

HAHAHAA! bendy-bitch! must remember that!

“Don’t ask me. I just did what I did best.”

“Which is?”

“Cause a scene.”

“Are you sure that was you or was that Atobe’s doing?”

“... Oh damn.”

i can imagine sanada saying "oh my damn" I heard it from a movie somewhere, and it reminds me of this (sadly, i don't remember what the movie is) THIS is an AWESOME story! I LOVE IT!
ChibiYnM chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
I can't believe that this is the third time I've read this fic and I still haven't reviewed. I love this fic! You were actually able to make Tezuka x Akaya work! And the SanaAto! SanaAto!
Hell Demon chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
“Come back here you bendy bitch! I’m not done with you yet!
Jo chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
Awesome story, nice style, well written, great plot...I give you four gold stars!
lie-a chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Gyahahahahaha...what a funny fic!) Ireally like it! Tezuka is still cool(?) by giving a hundred laps to run to all who disturb 'em! btw, UR is really intresting. I can still enjoy it, even I never see Kirihara!(well, I just watch TeniPuri a little) Would you like to send an e-mail to me? maybe we can talk about anime more. Who's yuour fave?
Shirohikari chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Brilliant

Beautiful

This story is on my favourites is you waned to know
Yukimi chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
That was really well written -

Actually I've never thought the Tezuka/Akaya pairing, but you've made them cute together :)
ranchii chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
However that isn't my favourite pairing, I really like it. Some scenes, with all teams, were abolutely great, so funny!
Officially Retired from Fanfic chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
That was really very very cute. I especially liked when all the schools got together to spy on them. The interaction was pretty hilarious at that point. Ah, Tezuka and Kirihara. I'm glad they got a happy ending. _
Vanessa chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Loved it and it made my day. But I felt so sorry for Kirihara when he found out Tezuka had a fiancé but I'm glad Tezuka broke up with her to be with Kirihara. I hope you write more crack soon.
Korokiri chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
*dusts off FFN account* I'm ready to review!

This had me giggling. X3 They really need to show those "After Practice" Scenes more. They're so much fun. XD

Anyway, good job! Unexpected pairing(To me at least, but I’m semi-new to this fandom). That's good. Ve~ry good!

“– yeah and it went out his nose, so I was like –
Kamitra chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
That was really interesting. I like all the ways the characters interacted (that's a huge cast!), as well as the Sanada x Atobe, even though I've never had an interest in that pairing before. ;
Storm chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
This was really great! Loved it! Never thought of this pairing before, but it works. :) Hoping to see more fics by you.

BTW, there was a couple of bit weird sentences in the fic, you might want to check it over again or have someone beta read it. At least some of them had to do with tenses. All in all, your writing style is great. :)
needchocolatenow chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
*glomps* we! finally, a LONG one-shot on the tenipuri section appears! and this fic was so cute! *glomps again* you should write more fics! yes, yes, yes! yes you should! haha. i'm so hyper right now. :) i like long ficcies! and this particular one shot is actually longer than a majority that is out there. WHICH IS A GOOD THING! _ and the ending to the fic is nice too. hehe. i'm working on a long one-shot too. i just can't find the ending. -_-; haha. i started in december...and it's still on going. haha. i'm so weird. Tezuka and Kirihara is pretty cute together, though i've never seen it before. :) another good thing! because i like new stuff. hehe. and the beginning was funny, with tezuka contemplating all those people for potential 'boyfriends.' (hehe...tezuka and shinji...that would be one to see...) ah...i'm rambling again. . sorry. well, write more soon!