How could you make Arianes love Percy? My heart is dying in my chest! *squeal!*

I love your writing. even though you aren't here on this littl eplace called earth, you do.

fabu

nic3e. in a god way

I neveer would have thought he would aim as low as to kll his sister's lover. oh god

sweetness

ITS THE BESTEST

XD

I love it too.

hi this story is very good and i hope that you havent abandond it because it is very good and i will be very sad if you dont update soon

love

me

this is really good please add more chapters when you can find the time to do so please,thanks

I have just discover your story and I love it! it's wonderful. I can't wait to know what 'll happen.

Your story has been excellent throughout with an astonishing attention to detail I've seen in few 'fics.

Only one problem I encountered throughout the story that violated canon. Ariane's mother was burned at the stake. This was proved impossible in Prisoner of Azkaban. And I quote,

"On the rare occasion that they did catch a real witch or wizard, burning had no effect whatsoever. The witch or wizard would perform a basic Flame Freezing Charm and then pretend to shriek with pain while enjoying a gentle, tickling sensation" (POA, 2).

Thus, her mother could not have been killed by fire.

Just a minor point to consider.

Thanks for writing an excellent 'fic,

Lamentit Eternum

Very cool :D The transition between Percy and Rowena's scene and Ariane's is a little muddled though, so it's rather unclear where one ends and the other begins.

Keep it up

~Mockingbird

I love this story! Please update! I cn't wait to find out what happens next.

MiMi