| Reviews for On His Last Day |
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Stockardfan07 chapter 5 . 12/25/2004 You are a Brillant writer. I love this story. My best friend and I are in love with this story and A Little To The Left. Please... do not keep us waiting to long on A Little To The Left. |
Jesper chapter 4 . 12/17/2004 Yeah if you don't write some more I may go nutty. What a wonderful and yet sad story. Please update this soon. |
Tars chapter 4 . 12/16/2004 if you don't write more i'm going to...do something, cry maybe. anyway, this is excellent, poor jed and poor abbey. i wonder if he means it when he tells her he'll come if she needs him. maybe she'll be pregnant, oh the possibilities. |
Bartlegg chapter 3 . 7/14/2004 This is just to say that my recent review was for chapter 3, for some reason it said it was chapter 1, and i don't know how to edit. but so this isn't a total waste of space...super job! |
Bartlegg chapter 1 . 7/13/2004 I was not expecting that. In fact, I didn't know what to expect. But the fact remains that it was written wonderfully, and I can't wait for the next part. The dialogue was extremenly beautiful, and I still have no idea what comes next. Great Job. |
Ktis2fun chapter 2 . 6/21/2004 Wow. The supense is killing me. Usually I can tell where the story is going to end but this story with Abbey choosing whatever she wants is great. She forgot to ask the meaning of "ever". Hum... I wonder what will happen next. |
Margo Wulfric chapter 2 . 6/20/2004 This is eating me up! I really want to know what happens next! Great chapter and please update soon! |
kla1388 chapter 2 . 6/20/2004 Ah I'm so into this! It's really compelling and heartfelt, I'm dying for the third part! |
Bartlegg chapter 2 . 6/19/2004 Wow, I have to congratulate you on a great, unique story about Bartlet leaving office that doesn't center around his death. I love how it started out so sad, and is now more hopeful and mysterious. I love 'Secret Agent Mann', it added a perfect does of humor to change the tone of the story. I'm hooked, post more soon. |
Ktis2fun chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 That was amazing and sad, though I can't imagine Jed doing anything like that. I loved it. |
AlickyNicholas chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 Oh. Dark and sad and very, very dramatic. I can easily see something like this happening to the two of them. Nicely done! |