Great story

I love fan fiction! It gives so many people the opportunity to write something fun and exciting. Some of the authors have wonderful imaginations, some write great characters, some even know how to develop a wonderful plot and stick with it from beginning to end.
I applaud all fan fiction authors; even the ones who can only manage one of the above characteristics. At times it feels frustrating that strange new plot lines appear and disappear or there seems to be extra exciting scenes added just to try holding the reader's attention but, they all should be applauded for their bravery and imagination.

The last two chapters are off topic, out of character, stupid, and total bullshit! I was thoroughly enjoying a good story and suddenly there is this fine big house, all the world is happy, and suddenly everyone goes away and H/HR are left alone in a bedroom scene. Harry stumbles and Hermione goes totally PMS explosive! She's never shown PMS traits to this extent before in this story, why now? The only reason would be that the author is bored and wanted to shake things up a bit. Well, way to go. You are well on your way to destroying all the work you have put in so far. I normally don't read abandoned stories for this very reason and it appears to be following that this one is the victim of an author who should have quit while ahead. I think I will.

This story must continue. You have taken it much to far to end it here. If you have abandoned the story, I will have to destroy you. If you are already dead, I will call the Ghostbusters to track donw your soul and put you back to work. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IM DYING HERE! ;)

This story is so awesome! Creative, funny, and pure genius. Congrats, and please update soon!

Oh boy I hate the stupid way north americans constantly use the wrong words for things, on of my pet hates is the stupid way they insist on writing visited or visit instead of talked or chat or some other word that actually describes the action correctly, Dumb buggers ruin godd stories with their stupidity.

I know this story was finished quite some time ago before the full story had been published, but even so the idea of Malfoy as head boy instead of Harry who just offed Voldesocks is totally ridiculus, actually I think it goes beyond that into the realms of stupidity, especially with Harry's girlfriend Hermione as the head girl.

I have to say that were Ron Skeeter Weasley my friend and did that lying to the papers thing about me, I would shove my size ten up his 'where the sun never shines' and throw his arse out of the house to rot by the road side. then again I dislike the Ron character for the bully and biggot he is in the Potter books.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

I this story complete?

Congratulations. You are one of the very few authors I've chosen to be on my top five. This story and it's successor, have made my day! They were interesting, and the plot was amazingly good. Great writing, and please review soon. Great job!

i like it

I beg of you, please don't abandon this amazing story! This and its prequel are my two favourite stories on you have to finish!

Meep meep! Come back, Shane, come back!

Hermione the DAYWALKER, so dead then, how sad. oh well it was a good read.