Wish you hadn't left us hanging... :(

It's getting good! Update soon! _

Wow, it's been nearly 5 years since you've last updated, but I can still hope that you'll update. It has been such a wonderful, interesting story so far and it would be a shame if it were left hanging like that.

Aw, you just can't end it like that! We need more to this story! Tifa came to confide in Vincent, right? You could add some of that in or something. You just can't end it like that! You leave way to many questions unanswered. I really REALLY like this story and I want you to continue it! Please? PLEASE?

Well, enough of my babble. I'll leave the rest up to you. I hope you continue this fic.

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323

This is a very descriptive story! It hooked my attention from the very first paragraph! Sadly, I can't read anymore tonight. It's almost one and my eyes are starting to hurt so, I'll just finish this tomorrow and drop another review your way when I'm done! Until then! Toodles!

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323

Ya know. I found this story on a site, but left unfinished. Glad I found it here. now I hafta find the rest on a different site. Other than that, this is one ass-kicking fic! Love the descriptions, the feeling, the aura, the darkness, and most of all Vince's persona! Mwahaha. okay nuff' said.

S'Lavi!

I read up to chapter 16! It's on Icy Brian's RPG Page! If you can't find it just go to and typr in Icy Brian and enter. The website should appear on the first page on !

You ARE going to update this fic...right? lolz

Hmm! *eyes glitter with interest* Love the story! Is this supposed to be a romance? Hmm... it looks like it! :) Keep up the great work!

Oh yay! I was so pleased to find "Stay..." posted at ! For some reason, I haven't been able to get into your web page to read the rest of this incredible story. Please tell me that this means you will continue to write it!

~P

Beutiful. I've read up to chapter 15 of this story [on your website]. It's a beutiful story that depicts the horror, dreadful, gory and eeriness of the mysterious Vincent Valentine; A prose that is so gripping to one such as I.

It made me shiver with fear, made me frustrated at some of the characters ignorance etc. The mood changes so beautifully that I feel that I must give you a standing ovation.

Please continue this story. I'm hoping that this story will not be like that of TifaStrife's "A Beginner's Wish"-left unfinished after months and months.

Your website is great. Keep up the great job Lucrecia Marionette.

Killer story Lucretia .

I am simply amazed. Your views on Vincent, Tifa, Cid, and Shera are perfectly displayed. While I have never completely agreed that Vincent is a vampire, persay, this work of art clarifies his vampirism. But the difference in this and other fanfictions I have read about Vincent the "Vampire", is that you make it seem quite possible that he does indeed need blood to survive. Detail is perfect, so perfect that I cried in the beginning chapters, and became scared towards the end of this chapter. Vincent seems very melancholy and mysterious. Quite frankly, I cannot stop thinking about the events you've portrayed. I salute your talent. My only complaint is that it's not completed! Don't leave me in the suspense! -Kinneas

What a wonderful story! Please, update soon! I really can't wait till the next part! Are Vincent and Tifa gonna end up together? PLEASE, PLEASE make this have TifaxVincent in it! PLEASE! I think they make such a wonderful couple! Hehehe! GREAT JOB!

I felt it important to respond to this post (the one previous to this) in order to save confusion and answer en mass. All I can say is that all of your points are valid and I agree with them 100%. How, one minor qualm with your own objections. When, at any point, have I said that the child in the prologue was Sephiroth and therefore anything to do with SOLDIER? Food for thought there.. I may have potentially destroyed my entire plot but I know how important detail is so I'd never do something so stupid. Hope I 'clarified' your points well enough