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by far the story is good, but it does not seem like the story is going anywhere and i think the chapters are too short. But i really hope that u one day pick up this story once again :)

Well your story is great so far. For the writers block I can help you there. See I also love to write. And you were right about the beach near Mr. K's house. I own the manga so I should know. Any ways the writers block. Try to read a few of your favorite authors to get an inspiration from them. Tell if it works. In other words send me and e-mail back and keep in contact with me.

I am really enjoying this. Please update soon. I love the Miracle Girls.

UH! you got to go to FLORIDA! i wish i could have gone! next time take me with you :)

Hi, this is more of a suggestion than a review, but in any case; I feel that you should continue writing. Don't always let the reviewers decide if you will continue your series, write on anyway. Maybe if this story doesn't make many hits, go on to write about something out, and if no one reviews it, who cares. If you like writing then keep doing it, after practicing a lot, you'll get better and better, and who knows, maybe you'll hit the jackpot...goodluck.