This really hits you in the heart. I could have seen this happening at that point in the manga, Sasuke and Naruto healing in those ways.

Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece~

This was beautifully written I can feel the pain that Sasuke was feeling and Kakashi's advice/lecture to Sasuke did knock some sense into him and also Kakashi was the best choice to say that because he also loose an important teamate.

awww that was sad , i wanted to hig Naruto now anyways I loke how you wrote him! Naruto is talkative and always showing his emotions so I you hit the spot there.

Damn I really like how well you used Kakashi in this story. As a person who lost his teammates he would know how difficult it is. He would know the guilt and feeling of failure. I could feel the feels. Well written and well done!

I think you were able to capture the characters really well. Naruto is very open with his emotions and he valued Sakura very much. Well done.

I dont know why i thought it was a good idea to read this. Im crying

It's sooo sad :(

Wonderba!

There is so much I could say about this, but I loved this story so much. I cried (like a baby) but I loved how you wrote this. Beautiful writing style, and amazing story!

this made me cry. im so glad its not canon, i wouldnt be able to process it if it were canon. you wrote this really well. i have to read a sasusaku romantic comedy now just to recover...whew...intense

Beautiful! You really knew your characters very well, and I really like Kakashi, he knows his students. When Sakura died, my heart a bit broken. You are indeed a good writer. :)

Wow. This has got to be one of the all time best stories I have ever read. I love the thought you put into it. You had me in tears at the end. So good.

sadness redefined ! great job!

tears T.T ..but I love the you have written it,very well written indeed.

I cried hard while reading this .
Awesome fic.