| Reviews for Undone |
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  Mna chapter 1 . 10/31/2010 Narcissa is not a death eater she ust agrees with the pureblood views but i love dis |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Wow! deep! its seems so real and sad! its lovely! |
 riverdaleswhiteflash chapter 1 . 10/5/2009 Ouch... ... well, at least she's wrong about Lucius... HE, at least, is a lot more loyal to his wife and son than to Voldemort. Good story, anyway. |
| Springrain chapter 1 . 10/2/2005 Great display of emotions and character-deepening (if that makes sense); the Malfoys are successfuly shown as appriopriately shallow and complicated. Funny too: "That was until Auntie disowned him. We didn't really talk much after that." |
| ka-mia2286 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005 I'm left speahless |
| ChrissyTNG chapter 1 . 1/28/2005 OMG WOW! I loved this story! It was really deep. I just absolutely loved that last line from Narcissa! Priceless. |
| SweetProserpina chapter 1 . 10/11/2004 Agh! Write more! This is excellent. You are a very talented writer. Everything flows smoothly, you capture emotions, and even better you make sure they have a sincere reason. Cheers-sweetproserpina |
| The Fuzy Llama chapter 1 . 8/3/2004 Wow! This story rocks! |
| Toby Hamee chapter 1 . 7/27/2004 Hm, interesting, and wonderful. Original. At least it's not another one of those 'Hermione is in love with Harry'sort of things. This is an actual fanfic. good for you. Toby |
| Sadako Kurosawa chapter 1 . 6/30/2004 What can I say, apart from this fanfiction being absolutely perfect? The emotions you set in this fic were simply astounding and lifelike. This was truly an excellent read. Thanks for writing it. :) |
| Raskira chapter 1 . 6/14/2004 I loved! It was really clear to me really I really liked it when you talked about what happened in the past. |
| Jelly-beaner chapter 1 . 6/8/2004 :O. :O. :O!OMG! I think that you are a very talented person...you deserve a medla or something...Wow...That was...wow...Lol sorry I'm a retard. Very good. Are you going to continue it? I think you should. Well I'm still stunned sorry. Well good job, keep up the B-E-A-UTIFUL work!:D |
| Trinity Day chapter 1 . 6/1/2004 Absolutely lovely, in a chilling, ugly-ish way. Which doesn't make much sense, but it's the best I could describe my feelings towards it. I really did enjoy it. I hope you write more Malfoy/Black fics. |
| Weasleylover1 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004 Wow! That was really different. Different in a good way that is. I've never seen Narcissa portrayed like that before. Very effective, I especially liked her comment about how Hell burns. I hope Draco learns from his family's mistakes and I'm glad she feels sorry about what happened to Sirius. Interesting idea and well written. Weasleylover1 |
