| Reviews for Once Upon A September |
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   dragonpie11 chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 yeah, your grammar is bad. but good for you to post this stories even though your still studying in english. better start than never, right ! |
| Nano-sama chapter 31 . 5/30/2016 My mother always said never trust the quiet ones... |
| avani chapter 1 . 7/17/2015 well written |
| otaku girl chapter 17 . 6/27/2015 I 3 this fic spelling is pretty bad though and kind of confusing in the end but really good plot!333! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2014 This is alright, but your grammar and word choice are a little bit... odd. Maybe, in the future, you could get a beta to help read through your chapters. Otherwise, the fic is fun and interesting. Keep up the good plot. |
| creeps-kun chapter 1 . 11/18/2014 You got this idea from boys over flowers but its a red tag instead of a blue one and they're the f4 meaning flowery four instead of sasuke. I'm not being mean because I still love this and I still love you . KISSES AND HUGS! |
| black'nwhitepanda chapter 37 . 10/9/2014 I'll be honest that I didn't really read the entire story (I only read from ch 1 to 6 and I jumped to I think the last 2 chapters 'coz I really want to know how you'll end it). That aside, I just want to comment on how you put things together. I was really, really confused on who's talking: the characters or their inners. Are they thoughts or what? I just think that you should make a fine line between the characters' thoughts or dialogue. That's all and congrats still on your fiction! :) PS. Hope you don't misunderstand my comment! |
| roxy chapter 6 . 8/9/2014 I luv the plot but I must sa horrible writer, reading this u cud never tell who's talking or even the setting of the story try working more on your work b4 posting more stories |
| Allora22701 chapter 37 . 1/22/2014 At first, i was like; what the heck, Sasuke's pop!? Don't you want your kid to have a happy ending!? Then it all ended up well with both sakura and sasuke returning to Tokyo. Awesome ending! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/1/2014 Okay so this is a really good storyline so far but its very confusing because of the grammar. You must build up your grammar skills so that when you post your stories people will enjoy the read. This has a really good plot but the dialogue for this story is God Awful. But if you'd had a disclaimer saying this is your first story sorry I didn't read it. Sometimes I don't read disclaimers. And if you didn't I'm sorry I insulted you as a writer. Shit happens oh well. So I'd say get an editor to help you unless you already have or read very thick books. |
| colette.wong.378 chapter 6 . 12/27/2013 It seems like a good story but i'm seriously confused. |
| sakura.souen chapter 37 . 10/6/2013 i really liked it ! i found this story s original, but sometimes i did find it hard to follow... loved the story :) |
| trueblue51 chapter 37 . 9/2/2013 this was amazing i love this story soooo much!make more plz!XD |
| FoReVeRaSASUSAKULoVeR chapter 37 . 8/16/2013 OMG ! OMG ! AHHHHHHHHHHH! This Story Is Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Epppppppppppppppppppp! Super Duper Amazing! I, FoReVeRaSASUSAKULoVeR a Filipino Citizen Salutes You For Making A Wonderfully Amazingly Story I Salute You ...! This Is The Second Story That I Saluted (Honestly) The First One Was ''Married To Sasuke Uchiha'' (Yeah That Story Was Amazingly Amazing Toooo) Thanks For Making This Wonderful Story Evahhhhhhh! Minna A-R-I-G-A-T-O-U ! :) )- A Rose For You! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/4/2013 OMO is it base on Boys over Flowers? That is a very good show 루루 |
