Man that last part was hot.

Oh wait a sec. Tora's back and now married to Van? I wonder what happened between her and the guy that she previously loved.

Oh, that was one fast shagging. Seems like Dilandau mellowed down too. How will Van and the others take her disappearance, though? And what's Hitomi's life going to be in Vione with Dilandau in tow?

Wow. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I can only imagine how their reunion will go.

Also, your story would be better, and easier to read, if you would put spaces or paragraphs in it.

Oh wow, you did it! Yey! I never expected this. But I'm glad you were able to update again after so many years. Also, I'm kind of confused now. Didn't Van break the (possible) engagement with Tora before Hitomi went back home to Earth after she was attacked by Merle? So should we assume that after months of being back on Earth, Van and Tora got together again and eventually married each other? What also happened to Merle's plan to "get rid" of Tora and Jet to have Van for herself?

I don’t know what keeps me reading D-H stories especially when it usually involves an abusive relationship (we all know how our boy becomes so But volatile at times). But I would really like to read how this story evolves. I know it’s been a very long time since your last update. But I know it wouldn’t hurt to express how much I had fun reading your story and hope for it’s continuation.

YOU HAVE to continue! PLEASEEE! read the entire fic today and i am dying to continue! soon please

I'm dense, so I have no idea. _

Why is this marked complete when it isn't?

great story

omigod! i loved ur story! i just stayed up 2 hours past my (supposed) bed time to read this. Finally someone with some writing skills! Sorry i didn't review b4 this chappie. I was to engulfed by the story and couldn't stop reading. I look foward to anything else u have to write! Keep up the awesome work!

Nice chapter please continue.

Nice chapter please continue.

I like this story. It is similar to many DxH fanfictions, but you hit it in a little bit of a different light. Though the chapters are a bit short, I understand how hard it is to write really long chapters. Good job with keeping many of the characters in character and explaining much of what's happening. A few things were a little unclear though. When Hitomi was in the training room and Chesta caught her wrist and what-not... I had no clue what happened in that time frame. I like the plot so please continue writing. I want to see how Dilandau will get Hitomi back cause... this is DxH. ~MysticalDreamer32~

I love this story you got to wright more. I can't wait.

good plot, good story, well writtin.

please update soon