| Reviews for Torn Wings |
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maryjane23 chapter 1 . 1/24 the scene from home alone 2. |
Lady Keiko Niwa chapter 17 . 7/8/2017 The best part is the fact that the whole jewel can never be used. The worst is you sre VERY long winded in you author notes. Nearly a eight of every |
sessholove chapter 17 . 12/18/2016 love it .. love d story.. |
scarlet moonbeam chapter 10 . 11/2/2016 The chapter that you explained how inuyasha got the sword would not have worked. Because even if the spell on inuyasha wore off and he was freed. He got the sword before kikyo was brought back. The sword needed a human to pull it out. So really inuyasha would have died after not being able to pull it out. Plus, if he did pull it out, it would not word because he has no human to protect. |
Undertheskys chapter 5 . 9/30/2015 Wow 15years... that's a long time |
Untitled Fate chapter 8 . 8/7/2013 Why does Naraku always say kukuku? |
Untitled Fate chapter 4 . 8/7/2013 There so mean, they ripped off her wings. [growls] I hope she gets revenge on them, because they're just plain evil. |
Untitled Fate chapter 1 . 8/7/2013 I love it! |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/15/2013 ok, i decided to read this story.. , and kawaiiiiiii. . , you make the story truly amazing (y) |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/18/2013 Great story. I completly loved it! |
Askosh Mosey chapter 17 . 10/25/2012 Well I'm fave-ing this cause I like the dying heroine theme, and you have it in this story to make a glazy eyes of me. Good work! |
young kagome chapter 17 . 9/11/2012 Wonderful story! I was hoping Kagome would be more productive, self sufficient, and use those amazing powers that she had more instead of always needing saving. But I still like how the story turned out. Great job and keep up the good work. |
Winged Hetalian Wolf chapter 17 . 6/19/2012 I was pleasantly surprised with this story. At first I wasn't too sure if it would be interesting but I gave it a chance. I'm glad I did because it did turn out interesting and it was well written too! It's so hard to keep Sesshomaru in character, especially with romance, but you did extremely well. Wonderful job! |
HibarixZhen chapter 17 . 1/29/2012 love ur story _ hope u can write the sequel~ |
Knox chapter 15 . 11/15/2010 I think you have a great idea for a story going on, but honestly your Kagome is the most insipid character I've ever read. I don't know what your idea of a strong character is, but whatever you have going on here is not it. |