| Reviews for Something Not So Predictable |
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   Aquarius Malfoy chapter 14 . 10/18/2012 noooooooooooooooooooooooo I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! YOU EVIL LITTLE...WHEN I GET MY HAND ON YOU OHHH I WILL MAKE YOU PAY YOU WILL PAY! |
| angela chapter 11 . 3/9/2011 Your story and your idea is really good, but you need to work on your writing! It is really inconsistent and not really smooth. Sometimes it's even hard to read because you spring to much between thoughts or descriptions. Try to link your sentences more and write like...keep the image of flowing water in your head, which grips you because it's so thrilling...if you understand my metaphor ). |
| TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 14 . 12/13/2010 awww so mean... poor Draco and why did Harry say that? Angry at Harry now... |
| TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 12 . 12/13/2010 you can't stop writing so I'm sending you a review... haha I HATE it when people make Vernon rape Harry... it makes me so mad... stupid Harry for cutting himself... |
| TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 8 . 12/13/2010 still good but i've noticed that you change the words in the different POV's. for example, in one chapter of Harry's POV he would say something and then in the next with Draco, you would either rearrange the sentence, lose words or add words to them. I suggest that you make sure that you check those kind of things if you're going to do this POV switching a lot for your stories... Sorry if that sounded mean, but it's just advice... Sabaknogaara4evr |
| TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 poor Harry... I feel so bad for him... how can people be so cruel? |
| Wisperwind chapter 14 . 8/29/2009 Ok, dont you cliffhanger us and then stop uploading will you? I mean, I really like the story and I wouldn't want it to and just now, but sadly most of the storys i like are discontinued... *crys* Well, hope I'll see you in the next chapter. oh, and sorry if my englishskills suck. I'm not that good in speaking english... p.s. you're name is hannah? lol I'm called that to :) |
| 99997777733 chapter 14 . 5/2/2009 MORE MORE MORE! |
| Sora Means Sky chapter 14 . 10/4/2008 GOD DAMNIT! UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY SO FUCKING MUCH! Sorry if all the swearing offends you, but it's the fucking truth! UPDATE PLEASE! |
| NemoChan320 chapter 14 . 3/24/2008 ah! no! dont do that! and plz update! plz! this is just torture, thats wut it is... -_- |
| lotr14 chapter 14 . 11/15/2007 UPDATE NOW! I HATE CLIFFY'S! please please please please please |
| shinseichieien chapter 14 . 8/10/2007 You must update, it is such a good story! I love it, do please update. I cant wait till the next chapter! XD love, your worshiping fan |
| Karina Potter chapter 14 . 5/13/2007 YAY! You're so mean! the words should be "i love u too" T_T But its so awesome at this point! And i don't have a lot of time to translate it either XD sorry! but i'll try my best, between work and projects, i swear! Keep the great work hannah! kisses! |
| Silver and Emerald Match chapter 14 . 4/15/2007 AWESOME :) You have to update ASSP! Can't wait to se what will happen next! Plz update FAST! Byee |
| OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 14 . 4/11/2007 aw thats so sad. we all know harry loves him too *tear*. and now he's all cutting himself and such again...and mean mean cliffy. you are horrible, because now i NEED to know what happens lol. you really are doing a wonderful job with this. please update soon! ~Jess |
