I really hope you will continue this fic someday!
Can't wait to read more!

Great story, I've gotten really invested in the characters. I would also like to see where the story goes from here. For those that are interested in I grammatically correct novel that has a great story then this is the one for you!

Alright I know this is really old and the author may not even pay attention to any comments on the story after... What fifteen years? Anyway, cancer can be cured by a magic person like Dende or one of the other Namakians let alone by the Dragon Ball's. The story is well thought out and all but not this part, maybe this is somehow explained in future chapters but it's kind of ruining it for me. I'm not saying that ChiChi can't die by some random disease or something but Cancer is a little basic. Take Goku's random heart virus, it was something made up and not even magic could cure it. The writer literally had to have someone come back from the future to deliver the cure that it was so rare. Again don't get me wrong I like the story so far but it fails to live up to the reputation of DBZ to just have ChiChi die by such a normal thing.

i havent really finished the story. but i'd like to know if goten has or will eventually be diagnosed with cancer since chichi had it when she was pregnant with goten?

Honestly I’m not surprised, the whole destroyer of worlds this is just really pointless. I mean it didn’t even affect canon at all.

To be fair it is extremely poor writing to base the events of your story on a poll. It only shows that you have no continuity to your story and that’s the events your writing about clearly hold zero impact on the story and are just thrown in with little care.

So I’m guessing lime is going to start dating your si Travis which was your plan from the beginning. Gotta day the story is starting to lose interest.

That was really kinda lame. The whole my instincts are making me break up with her is so lazy and poorly thought out it’s cringe worthy.

I already dislike Travis just for even showing up.i hope he has little purpose in this story because I’m getting the pic self insert vibe here

At least you have a good reason for putting your story on hold, all I can say is that I look forward to the day that you update your story.

Just finished reading your story.

This story is so GOOD! Why, OH WHY haven't you updated?! It's such a great story! I love how Vegeta secretly cares so much for Gohan, and I hope we get to see more of that in the future! He is a hundred times the father that Goku EVER was. Screw Goku! And, I hope Vegeta stays true and fully intends to honor Gohan's request, I just hope he doesn't go Majin Vegeta. Never liked that but I know others who do, so...

Besides, if you don't finish the story, we'll never be able to find out just who the "destroyer of worlds" really is. Gohan hasn't met Videl in this story yet. Babadi isn't using her as the destroyer is he? What a twist that would be! But to have to defeat her as a super saiyan 3? Meh, so maybe not. Which, btw, I can't stand what they did to Gohan in DBZ/Super with the Great Saiyaman. So overly CHEESY, and they made him so weak. Long live the elite saiyan warrior Gohan! Vegeta even made it official!

Otherwise, the only female "destroyer of worlds" in anime that I can think of is Sailor Saturn. Unless the destroyer is just a generic villain? Just saiyan. Which, I am curious just who sensei is too. Come on, we need answers, so update already damn it!

I absolutely LOVED this story and am dying to know how the outcome of the gohan's battle, who sensei is, etc... please, please come back to this eventually.

I made an account just to make a review for this.
I spent the last maybe 7 or 8 hours binge reading this entire fanfic, which is quite a feat as I love to read but very rarely do I find something that hooks me in and forced me to binge read.
The realism, the emotion, and the refreshing development you put into all of the characters was superb!
I was fascinated with the story, and was heartbroken when I saw it ended right at the beggining of the climax!
I hope law school went well, and that life hasnt thrown too many curveballs your way. You have amazing skills as a writer, and while it has been atleast a decade, it would bring great joy to many if you at the very least decided bring this all to a conclusion.

I mean a fanfic that was followed by this guy and that was created in 2017.

Cool this account isn't dead. there's a fanfic that was created 2017.