so sweet. he found her great story. any hopes of a chapter 2? i mean this was great by itself...just leaves me wondering...U know?

It's okay, but a bit short and not very much content for me to actually create an opinion. I hope this is the first chapter of several? Need to see more activity. /Frida

I don't reckon Tc would tell his little brother he'd marry Chris when they were in high school. He could possibly think that to himself but to voice it? I dunno.
I also don't think that Characters with nicknames need to explain how they got them on the first meeting. A simple 'you can call me Chris' would have been sufficient.
But yeah, it's ah-ight!