Reviews for The Alpha Omega Series
Kirei J chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
For the first ever fic in the Akuroku tag that was ever made. Opening with Soriku...I find rather insulting. Now I'm sure you must be a lot better now that its 2012 then maybe you were in 2004 but...must you really keep this up? It's kinda terrible to say the least I mean really?
"He continued to rub his boyfriend's surging length"
you fucking kidding me? That sounds like...horrible and kinda scary very much a turn off and very distracting. To put this bluntly you wrote bad porn. very bad porn, I'm sure you were some teen just wanting to be naughty and what not but Lord...either rewrite this or get rid of it my god...
and next time open with what you said the damn thing was going to be about...if its about Soriku then fucking put SORIKU its not that hard.
SaYue-San chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
The last chapter of this fic surprised me. I never expected Zexion to have such a vulnerable side to him. I guess you like me have played the KH games to death and you really seem to get the characters you write.

I always thought Zexion hated Axel. Although I never got to play any on COM cause i don't have a psp :( i'd love to know what happened to Sora, Donald and Goofy to have them sleeping in the pods at the beginning of KH 2. Still loved this pairing more than I thought I would :) can't wait to see the next letters
LostMySightToLight chapter 6 . 10/16/2010
WOW...THAT WAS...*FANS SELF* THAT WAS PRETTY HOT...PLEASE RIGHT MORE...
KaiserinAstraia chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
LOL I LOVE the end. 'Pfft, its only the fourth time this morning..." SO GREAT XDDD 333
CloudFairFF7 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
ok this is a very hard yaoi and its only the first chapter! ok i like this story no matter how sick it is
thedeviltheangelandtheme chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
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Well! That was yummy!

D

More...

May I suggest B for bondage?

...sorry, that sucked.

;

-dEmOn-
S.RAYN chapter 4 . 1/16/2009
Super sweet and mildly fluffy, loved it!
Hiro-san chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
OMG! I love this! It's so good :):) Please write more!
HoneyFlavoredPocky chapter 6 . 9/30/2008
w yay! That was really good smiles A
madhatter312113 chapter 5 . 7/20/2007
I really enjoy your collection of stories keep up the good work
Queens of the mole people chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
this was so good _ never read something where Sora was seme, nice twist there! loved the milkshake hehe
BlueFlamesRedTears91 chapter 3 . 12/27/2006
you need to update. and alot sooner than usual. i love these one-shots. although this one was REALLY short, but that's okay. it was good. i think you could have written more to it. but it made sense. well keep writing~ BlueFlames
Ashlee-chii chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Sora seme, lol. Those are just so cute ;;
Chikara Yes me again chapter 2 . 6/5/2006
Love the work
xxhieadzeroxx chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
omg more more more
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