Too depressing. Gicing up on this one. Other HP stories good.

Really enjoyed :)

I’ve only read a few lines of you’re story ,but I love it
Already ,everyone is in character and I love that you
Made hermione tall.#gotallgirls
#ronisanass
And I love how Ron behaves if he would be
Popular he would behave just like that .

It was really angsty but it was still a beautiful for sharing it

wow.. it was the best..loved it..:)

Thankyou... I requested this to my friend and he took it to heart when he read this because he used to cut because of his family and he is starting to realise that everything gets better...so thank you again

I really appreciate you tackling an issue such as this with such grace. This is one of my favorite stories on here. I hope you have other work like this I can read.

you suck at writing its pissing me off

I just can't imagine how Hermione would let him slap her without hexing him, or how she can call herself a mudblood, etc. even when she knows SHE was the best of all classes. It makes absolutly no sense. But it is AU and your fiction, so I forgive you :)

I would feel very icky too if I had written how Ron 'rapes' Hermione. She doesn't want this, doesn't like this and cries. It can just be called rape. And Harry is a wimp for not killing Ron. Ron is worse than Death Eaters. And Harry a cowart.

I can't believe Hermione wouldn't either leave Hogwarts or ask the professors for help. Seriously? Ron slaps her blue and black while calling her mudblood and she just obejs him? Without leaving or calling for help? And if they are 16/17 years old, he probably raped her regulary. She would have left, killed him or herself, I am sure of it. Hermione is strong, a Gryffindor.

What are Neville and Harry for wimps? Both had a perfect shot to stun Ron. Harry acts like Ron, a single asshole, would be the same war as Voldemort and 100 Death Eaters. He just needs to stun him and then either torturing, oblivating or killing him. All very reasonable options.

Interesting plot. Top on class / Seeker Ron? Submissive Hermione who bows her head to Ron? Ravenclaw Draco friends with Nevelle? Must be very, very AU...
Durmstrang / smart / powerful Harry would have been enough for a AU in my opinion, but now its too late to edit the whole story.

Very childish

Cool i love this story

"I hate this, I really Hate this"
Shit, i hate the way ron treated her (mione) and that's susks...
I just wish hermione not to be so dense, idiot, pathetic like that.. she's suppose to be brilliant, kind hearted, etc.
okay.. actually your idea of the story is good, well I like this story! keep writting kay!
-Wish you all the best (A.P)