Will you be making make an sequel to this after u finish this book. It's just too well written almost like I'm reading an actual movie script and thank you for writing this

this has been wonderful! please write more, begging. please.

I do love this story. Hopefully it hasn't been completely abandoned. *hint hint*

I know that it has been a long time since you have updated this story, but I would love to see you finnish it because it is really really good. It is very hard to find a good Riddick/Jack story.

please update

I know it's been like over a year and a half since you updated last. And the chances of you finishing this masterpiece is very slim. I would love it if you would finish it please! I've read all 29 chapters in one sitting...it's 5:30 am...if that shows my devotion to it. Please, please finish!~Nef~

“When they’re threatening to kill you, they can’t be thoughts of as human. It’s called servile Jack.”

lol, I think the word you're looking for there is 'survival', not 'servile' - just a slight difference ;p

interesting what-if take on the Riddick-verse

Zephyr5

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I am so glad that you are continueing this story. I cant wait to see what happens to jack and how everybody deals will following riddicks orders. Update soon!

oh man thats a really bad spot to end the chapter. great story though plz update soon.

WE! Up date soon I am having a blast with the story!

ditto on the raves! Keep posting! Love this story!

Good fun. I think it's spelled "Bait" usually . . . are you varying the spelling for a reason?

I love this story. This was a great chapter. I am so glad you updated again.

By the way, I think you meant to type "bait" instead of "bate".

Wonderful chapter! A few spelling errors, but nothing too big. I was so glad to see another update of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!