Hella good!

I m still crying I loved it

i loved it yayh for happy endings

yugi is so out of charter so mad and angry go back to being sweet and nice yugi

this was a really, really good story! thanks a lot for sharing this with us! thanks, thousand thanks right from Italy! -

one simple word for this book ...AWSOME! keep righting though i hated the ending but the rest was fine c ya later!

aw the ending was cute

Nice ending! I feel stupid for not looking at whether or not the story was done yet. xDD

I would be happy to be your beta!

still bad grammar. Oi. Please fix some of that, I know you can do it.

That was a sweet chapter, though.

Nice start, although the part where Atem and Anubis talk is really chopy and unsmooth, apparently anubis speaks with really bad grammar. xD

If you could, please fix that; it'll make your story much more attractive to readers.

Other than that, update!

finally, a decently written yugioh story . although yugi sure freaked the eff out, didn't he? anyway, thanks for writing it, you had a great idea and i'm glad you put in on paper...or...computer? 0.0

you know what I mean. anyway, good job, thanks for the read!

I love this story. Eventhough the ending make me little confused but I like your story! Please make some more yami x yugi again!

nice

What a great story! Each one better than the job.:)