*nearly crying* I feel so bad for Wil! DX He's gettig emotionally hurt and he's my favorite character! TT-TT ... *snivel* I'm not sure if Florina should stay as one of my top 5 favorites... I'll replace her with Guy..

1- Wil!
2- Rath
3- Mattew
4- Nils
5- Florina(not anymore) - Guy

Out of all your long FE fanfics, this is the best, great pairing, good plot, great writing
I hope that you wright more!

WOW. In capital letters too :3 I read this all in one shot and I was amazed through the whole thing. It's sweet, it's sad, and it's most definitely humorous. Guy was a hilarious muse, Hector was a rival that makes misunderstandings, Florina was shy as always, and Wil was cheerful, but sad when the time had to come. The necklace idea was cool and imaginative and amazing when all hope seemed lost. Flora shall be the first Pegasus knight to use a bow! Well hopefully XD. If your chapters weren't so addicting i would have written 25 more reviews for you, but it would clog up your mail -.-'' Sorry if i sound critisizing (which i am not b/c theres nothing bad to critisize about!) Great story is the last thing i will say/type :3

Kya! So cute! X3

Wow, you really went out with a bang, didn't you? Fantastic job, to be sure. )

Sorry I can't say more. My eyes hurt from reading for several hours straight, lmao!

Cheers,

-Manna

Bwahahaha! I swear, I read this like, years ago. But then again, I'm not 100% certain of that.

So I'm rereading it. I'll probably review at the end, since I'm annoying like that. I kinda missed reading your stuff, to be honest. I still remember when you posted this! And then when you posted the first KRaine fanfiction, too. 3

Cheers,

-Manna (KK)

actually, it goes fiorafarinaflorina, in terms of age fioras the oldest. btw, what event were you trying to catch? archery?

Utterly awesome...this is so going under my favs.

The only thing I don't like is how you just skipped time at the beginning of each chapter. Perhaps you should have written at the top how much later it was or where they were or describe what had happened to up to that point.

I stayed up all night and read the whole thing!

I loved it

Too bad it's over. O Well I'm glad that you have a new interesting fic in progress!

-BWSH

WAH, thats a good story, long, sweet, and the Child... will she be a Pegasus Knight, an Archer or both, :-) make another like this

hey love your story so far wil and florina are to of my fav.s (besides matthew sain and guy) lol

That was a very good story. you have most likely got alot of these but I really mean it it was a very touching story.

About staying with you until the end, you're very welcome. This story was just absolutely fantastic. You tackled a concept that made me very interested and that I would have never thought of. Sure, you had your ups and downs, but in the end, everything turned out beautiful. Don't give up writing fanfics, ok?

What are you talking about? That's a happy death for me! It's my dream death! Anyways, Flora sounds so adorable! Damn shame that she doesn't have the Illian hair color though! I wonder what she grow up to be like. Maybe a pegasi archer! Anyways, it's sad this story is over. I'm gonna miss making death threats at Hector and Farina. And expressing my undying love for Florina and Wil being together. Well, I'm wishing you luck! Also, hoping you'll write more stories just as good as this one!

I just read the whole thing. Great job! I look foward to seeing more FE work from you! And, you were right, that epilouge was a but steriotypical, but it fitted well. And I loved the last line.