That was really nice! I just loved it! I hope you continue with this! It really has potential! And about that flame I just found in your rewiew list, I have to say some people really can be stupid. If you like twincest, you like it. End of story. If you don't like it, then why the hell are you reading it? Anyway, prease continue! This story is fantastic!

VERY VERY VERY sad. ya, even I was quite touched. (i am usually like stone, no emotions) depressive...

It was bad! It was good! Please do more! So much better than Yoh/Anna! *attacks* JAB JAB JAB!

T_T So sad... *wails* Nu... Poor Hao and Yoh... *wails some more* A really good fic though. *keeps on wailing* Sorry... T_T That was just so sad...

OMG, that's so sad! ::Sob::

That was so sad! I felt like crying! Although you could have tuned it into a lemon/lime (whatever)fic.

TT bua.. how sad! I hope there will be another chapter, if not, anyways it was good... i love the pairing YohxHao so don't change it!

your right omg you suck at wriiting fics. this is so gay there brothers omg i want to threw up omg.

I simply CANNOT believe this.

Two of my favourite writers in one night stage me the biggest disappointments of my year so far. Yesterday night I stumbled upon a TWINCEST yaoi fic by da*mouse, whom I regard as one of the most talented Mankin writers, and tonight, by Apple-chan, undoubtedly one of my favourites as well.

What is the matter with you? Do you not realise that this Hao/Yoh relationship is morally wrong? Don't you see that it is so sick and disgusting? Why are the two of you spending TIME on such rubbish writing? Why are you not updating your other lovely stories with your time, but instead writing something that pollutes the young minds of users? Why are you not updating your joint-project, which had left us readers hanging for such a long time since the last update?

Instead you produced this piece of disgusting material promoting incest...sre the two of you trying to promote twincest?

As with da*mouse, I am so disappointed that I will NEVER again read your stories, not even the extremely well-written Promenade. Never again I will read works of writers who supported the Hao/Yoh pairing.

If the two of you still have any sense left, wake up to the real world, where twincest is ILLEGAL.

man u dont give oneself much credit!

THAT STORY WAS AWESOME!

UR GOOD AT ANGST!

hey try one for horohoro and Ren

or maybe if ur up to a challenge RENxxJUN

YOU DON'T SUCK! You write angst quite well actually. I'm a sucker for that kind of stuff. You did a good job writing shounen ai too. I don't think I could ever write it because my face would burst into flames... I won't kill you simply because I like this fic too much and greatness should be praised! _ I couldn't write something like that! Keep you the good work! I like Yoh/Anna, but the whole Hao/Yoh thing has kinda been rubbing off on me... I don't even know how that started! Hehe.. what can you do?

*Cry my heart out* You're so cruel! Meanny!
Above is the feeling line, now's the review. I LOVE IT! You pull out the feelings so well I almost cry in front of the monitor (seriously). I am looking forward for more!

Wah! I REALLY want to like Yoh/Hao, but I can't. T_T I'm too young to like coupings like these...right?

Hey, Apple-chan, it's Yomigaere [aka Marco from the SKRP Community] and... whee, you've once again managed to wow me with your skills. That was great and... angsty. *has a thing for angst* I love your fics!

Nice. Very sad.