Your story is really interesting and well written!

Quite realistic and a good view of the werewolf persona.

Thanks!

If you want to talk about it my mail is

Bye

Nicely done. I rather enjoyed this.

I loved this story! It was so good! I wish it wasn't so short though.

~bRiTtNeY

That was a interesting story... You are a very creative writier! I am off to read your other stories!

This is absolutely the best story I have ever read! The detail, the wording in your sentences, and the characterization is per-fet! There aren't words to describe to you how awesome, great this story is! I absolutely loved it.

Great Story! Gefaellt mir sehr gut. Hoffe Du schreibst bald noch mehr. Gruss nach Hamburg aus Chicago.

really good. i enjoyed that.

*re-reads her review*

That. Sounds. Darn. Rude. Actually, now that I know you a bit better, I am not THAT surprised about you producing such an excellent story anymore. But you knew that, didn't you?

And in any case, it gives me a reason to hand you yet another meaningless review that adds to your account. Mwahahaha!

OK, after my first, pretty unconvincing attempt at communicating what I like about your story, here comes the second one- which is hopefully more convincing. Here we go:

I really don't know what you want! You're a very good writer- ok, not that I had expected you to be anything less than a good writer...

The entrances to every chapter alone are really great, as I said. Bit of a queer comment, I see - but that's what struck me first- I'm sorry. That isn't the only thing which is very good about the story- it's an unusual interpretation I genuinely enjoyed reading, you may be right about the plot- but this is written so well it didn't really matter. The characters were granted the favour of keeping their characters, which is the mistake a lot of writers seem to make- you took them with you through the story. Another thing I've been in raptures about is that last sentence! You'd win prizes for that. It's like chocolate...

that was such a good story!

*sigh* I WANT MORE!

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Very good! Clap clap.

You told me you've been wondering why people liked especially this story, SR.

Can I tell you something? It's not hard to see why!

I would never have thought you capable of something as wonderfully brillant as this.

The three most important things about fanfiction are: 1. letting people stay in character, 2. good and believable ideas and 3. an interesting writing-style which is worth reading. You've covered all three of them marvellously.

I wish my work was half as good as yours!

Great. I cried. Its so great to see a Lupin/Snape fic with the two not biting each others heads off.