Please don't give up. Awesome story.

I really like this FanFictiont and do hope you deside to finish it :)

Hey ! It's been a long time since you updated this story ... I hope you have not given up on it !
I'd love to see how it all turn out

I do hope you intend to continue this. It's really engaging.

hope you're still continuing this story! look forward to reading more. i love it so so much.

I am absolutely in love with this story. The characters have grown and changed and I can not wait to read more.I know its been a while but I would truly love to read more

I'm with SixPerfections on this! Where is the plot? You set up the beginning of the story with guys being after Max and the mutant serial killer but nothing happens along either of those lines for 15 or more chapters. And the romance seems stilted to me. Max and Logan have extraordinary senses which would tell either when one is aroused or excited or pissed or whatever. Just by hugging him, Max should be able to tell Logan weighs more than he should (his admantium skeleton is the reason for that), yet Max hasn't figured any of that out. And I've been waiting for some action to occur and haven't seen any of it through 28 chapters. Finally the story hasn't been updated in a year. Have you lost interest or are you planning a rewrite? Either way, the story needs a lot more suspense and action in it.

Good cross, interesting to see how it goes from here

Ok, where the bloody hell is the plot? I've been getting hints of 'bad things' happening and a problem they need to solve.. like the mutant serial killer. But it was mentioned once and then forgotten... now its just a romantic drama between wolverine and max. Where is the plot? Where are the people after Max? Who is this murderous mutant? What about the connection in the past between Wolverine and Max? None of these points have really moved forward at all in like seven chapters.. just saying

Well, some of what happened when max freaked out was kinda confusing. Maybe need to clean that up and streamline it. I'm liking the story but it feels like it's hit a bit of a slow patch. I'm guessing next chapter things will keep moving though. Very nice, will keep reading

Funny Logan, you are acting like a teenaged kid! lolz poor guy is so awkward - for Wolverine - its hilarious. A smoking hot super confident and snappy woman can potentially throw anyone off their game :)

Logan is funny in this fic.. usually he's the one who's cool and in control but Max has him a little off balance. It's kinda fun to see. great story so far 'likin it :)))

I'm on chapter five, and I've been blowing through the chapters. I don't remember dark angel the show but your max is whitty and sharp as a whip with a wicked tongue. I like her a lot, makes this story extra interesting :). Good so far. I'm guessing there is a connection between manticore and weapon X.

Really enjoyed this story, hope you update it soon. :)

Loving the reference to a strong woman able to take care of herself and her bike. Can picture the shock looks on Logan & Scott's faces when she fixed and cleaned her bike WITHOUT their help. And she did it bluring. LOL My girl rocks!