AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING! LIKE WOW YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE ! IVE NEVER SEEN ANYTHING LIKE IT !:) JUST WOW PLEASE COMPLETE IT AND MAKE A 2-3-4 AND THEN A 5 PLEASE COME ON KEEP IT UP ITS SO GOOD YAAAA :)

I really like this story and wish you would continue it. I believe that it can keep going for a while. Grand idea mate

I'm getting the vibe that the mech prototype is a product of the OLD Human empire before its de-evolution from the Forerunners. Am I correct?

gahhhh... massive cliffhanger.. please revive this PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!.. i mean if you just ran outta ideas send me a pm and im sure i can come up with some to help ya out

Wow, with this many reviews, you really should make an epilogue!

Oh, and i think the story was pretty good, but i think you should divide them into paragraphs a bit more.

! NOT THE FRIGATE!... oh yea, poor Garrett and Jack...

damn it! update this soon!

I honestly wish you hadn't abandoned this.

good fic, why did u abandon it?

nice story! especially the 1st part involving jack and the infection form. LOL! keep up the good work!

I think this is one of the best fan-fics i've read yet!

i was just wonderin if you gonna continue this as the story really good. are you waiting for moe reveiws or somthing?

Absolutly amazing story! sorry i cant offer any points to improve on but i cant think of any. cant wait for the next chapter.

I think that this is a good story and I hope you update it soon.

hey man you have one good as story, and im just wondreing if you are gunna continue it, i would really like to know what happens after the mac round hits the ship.

kaelquel

Damn if only you continued with this story its a good one and i wanna know if they live or if one of them dies...