greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well and still writing. I must say, I was rather dubious of this story at the beginning, but after reading it, I must say it is a rather good story, and story line, and I would like to see it continued. I hope your muse has simply taken a very very long vacation, and you will be able to hopefully continue this story. If it is dead, if you could let me know...Again, I hope this finds you well.

To bad you dropped this

I'm pretty sure Koharu is the woman and Homura is the guy...

first a one year gap, then a six year gap...

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

huh, I thought Homura is the male advisor (more so because of the name. Koharu sounds like a girl name)

Does this mean that Ranma is going to be tempted with power from someone? Or is it that he will be betrayed by someone close to him? Or maybe he becomes corrupted through some subtle nudges?

hello

Good story you should keep going. I am glad you didn't get rid of Ranma's humanity.

An update someday would not go amiss...

I hearby rename this fic "Ranma becomes a wimp!"

this is truelly pathetic.

a) you've reduced his strength, speed and amount he normally trains (everything can be training!) from that show in cannon by a rediculous amount.

b) he's sharing his techniques left and right to such a degree he has obviously abandoned all his honor (family schools are CLOSED! they do not share their techniques to those outside it).

c) I seriously doubt that he would suddenly decide to become a ninja at the drop of a hat, even for new techniques. He's more likely to refuseto become one whilst picking up the techniques via observation and trial-and-error.

AND this is just a short list..

READ THE RANMA 1/2 MANGA

:-).

moar! Oh man, I need more chapters. I wish you get his curse out already or at least get some romance in there and moar fight scenes hehe. moarr! Thanks for the fic.

Good, but dead story

Good stuff.

Thanks for sharing.