I love this. So full of drama, great storytelling and excellent character development.

Second time reading.

Absolutely loved this. Couldn’t put it down. Well done.

Read this twice and enjoyed it just as much but, you really can't leave it so open, all stories need closure, I hope you have continuec your writing

I'm going back and rereading some of the old, good stories, and took on this one tonight. I was glad I did. Really a great story, showcasing John and Scott, and bringing in lots of little details from the series. (I seem to remember that Mr. Svenson had some connection to something else - maybe Spectrum? - but can't remember what it was.)

The open ending is just what was needed, I think. Going on with the story would have been far more angsty and a severe contrast to the action of the story as it stands. Letting the reader imagine the rest was the best choice.

Thanks, Claudette.

hahaha...well do i have a story to tell you! i originally reviewed this story 7 years ago back in 2004 but never actually made it past the first chapter where i was amazed that the tiny town of Katherine was mentioned. not sure why i didn't read on, but i'd never actually read any thunderbird stuff before so wasn't interested in the fandom.

then about six months ago i started reading star trek 2009 fanfiction and one of my favourite authors also wrote thunderbird stuff. so one thing led to another and i started getting into the thunderbird fandom...

and lo and behold i stumbled across this story for the 2nd time! i read the first chapter and was like, 'WOW! they mentioned katherine, thats where i was born! that's soooo crazy!...hang on...i really vaguely remember another story like this..."

so i went back through my review history and found my original review!

how crazy is that? so 7 years later i finished your story and found it to be FANTASTIC! well done you!

so thats my crazy long winded review and my only question is:

are you ever gonna to a sequel?

hahahaha!

anyway, thanks again and sory this review was a long time coming!

Thanks for this great story! I loved it! You're a terrific writer ad the whole plot was just awesome wnd well thought out. Goes to my favourites!

Kudos!

Oh no, what's happening now? But at least they weren't found... This is so incredibly well written, I feel like i'm right in there with them!

Yay

But how on earth did John manage to walk all the way back with a gun wound? For he was shot, wasn't he?

Well I sure hope he gets Mestari back...

Oh my god... no, he's NOT dead! *glares*

I'm so behind on my work now, but I just can't stop reading...

Great plot twist! I hope John can stay hidden. Bud why is his signal gone? More questions... gotta read on :o)

Just wanted to tell you again what a cool story this is! I'm so hooked...

They just threw the watch out the window, right? Please?

*horrified gasp*

you didn't kill him, did you?

I am intrigued :o)

This is really good so far!

I don't mind waiting. I would like to wait for the next chapter that is to come. How will they help Scott go through this? How can John help him understand that he doesn't blame him?

You're one heck of a writer. Just so you know.

peace out