Lol! Boba with the hiccups! Funny! Great job! :D

*applaudes*

Just makes Boba Fett seem even more human. In a more humourus way xD

Poor Boba, hiccups do suck. haha

Oh my god! Didn't see that coming! you are great!

*hands Boba spoon of peanutbutter* Always cures my hic-ups. Please don't shoot me. ()

Lmfao. That was so funny! I loved it! Odd for me to venture outside the Zoids section, but I just had to click on this one! Lol.

This was very well written, and I must say I am impressed! I've written and read a lot of Fanfiction, but I must say that this is impressive!XD I was thinking of writing a SW fanfic, I'll have to PM you about it sometime.

I really liked this. It was all serious and really Boba Fett-like up until the end, and the last line just got me good. Lol. THat was priceless.

Poor Boba... I hate hiccups too. Lol. I hope to see more great SW fics from you! You'll have to keep you eyes open for my Jango fic, if I ever get around to typing it. My pesky KH fic and my Zoids fics are eating up all my time. Agian, fabulous work! Well done! (and I don't just say that to anybody!)

Hilarious and in-character! Fantastic job! One for the favorites list! :)

~Ibeyla

Ha ha! Poor Boba! Imagine how embarassing it would be to get the hiccups in front of Jabba...

*giggles*

Absolutely devilish idea. I knew what was coming from the moment I read "diaphragm", but it was even funnier that way. Boba Fett is cute when he's pissed off. ;-)

I read this again, and it's still funny. hehehe...

Poor, poor Boba!

*tries very, very hard not to laugh, as laughing at Fett can be fatal*

*nervously suppresses hiccup*

That was hilarious. It was made funny both by the sheer inapproprate-ness of the situation, and the absolutely deadpan, serious, tongue-in-cheek tone of the whole thing.

Imagine...Darth Vader with the hiccups:

Darth Vader: Luke... - hic - I am your - hic - fa - hic - ther.

Completely takes any menace out of a dark lord, hmm? ;)

(Oh, and re. the review - no, I don't mind at all if your friend links the poem - though I'd *cough* like a link to see for myself *cough*. I'd be thrilled.)

-hic-

Hehehehehe! That was greatly awesome and fantastically cool! AKA I LOVED IT! I love Fett and hate the hiccoughs...what more can I say? :D

Boba Fett with hiccups! That's so funny. Not impossible...but funny anyway. Although I thought his helmet had a bioscreen which filtered out pollens, bacteria, viruses, and gaseous abbereneces?

Now that was delightfully funny and you still had Fett come off as his typical stoic self.

LMBO! the hiccoughs! HAHAHAHAHA! yes, they can be rather infuriating. whoo, that was such a twist of irony...haha!

What? Fett and *humor*? What could be better? That was great.