I know that this story is from 2004, and from the look of your profile, you don't write anymore and may never see this review. But I can't ignore what I just read in your author's note. The last chapter you most definitely had Jack rape your OC. No means no. Period. Your character is scared of him, was kidnapped by him and basically had the choice of being paraded through a bunch of men naked (who would have raped her too) or being forced to have sex with him. That is rape. She told him no, laid there not moving while it happened, and then was shaking and crying afterwards. He also got her high against her will by blowing smoke in her face. Not to mention, all the touching and stripping he did to your character throughout the rest of the story leading to this is sexual assault. A drunk/high person forcing themselves on someone is still rape. Alcohol or drugs are not an excuse.

I know that you think Jack Sparrow is hot, but hot men can still rape women. Being hot doesn't mean that consent is a given.

Amazing!

Loved all of your Jack Sparrow stories. Especially enjoyed the sex scenes. Let me if you or anyone else posts ant POTC or Johnny Depp fan fiction. I'd love to read it.

Hey!

Love this story! But I wonder one thing...is Jennys last name Wren or Samuels? Just cuorios...

(And I'm sorry if the spelling is wrong Cause I'm from Finland).

Roza

I love your story!I think you have captured Jack Sparrow wonderfully. I have no idea what affnet is lol. I happened arcoss your story by wonderful accident. I hope to read more Jack Sparrow stories soooonn. I'm begging ya for more Jack!

hello! i love the way you write jack brilliant! as for the new developments DONT DO IT NORRINGTON!

more, soon?

Just like to say, so far, very nicely written.

Although the whole quotation mark thing is pissing me off. lol sorry. I just hate how people use one quotation mark when they should be using two.

Awesome story! I really enjoyed it and the sex scenes get an A you are a very tallented writer. Its a shame that the story will never be finished, but I enjoyed it while it lasted!

Thanks for the great read,

Dogo

p.s. I love how you portrayed Jack! Its exactly how i always pictured him. A real pirate and a valiant anti-hero.

wow! this chapter was HOT! I had to drink some water after this...you are great with descriptions and i love that you take the physical relationship slow. So SEXY! anyways great joy! on to chapter 11!

Thanks,

dogo

woa x

interesting story.

I've enjoyed it so far.

Sorry, don't feel like signing in. You made me hate my favorite character in this chapter. Poor Jenny, I don't think I'd ever survive that situation. :( I do really love your writing, you are very talented. I know it all turns out right, because I'm actually reading this twice now, but I still feel so bad for Jenny in this chapter! Still ove the story :)

Genn

Hi. Yeah. I am a clinically obsessed PotC fan, and I think What JS Wants was horrible. I mean, Jack has self control and is not Irish. And he therefore doesn't have an Irish accent. DUH.

I just had to say, I absolutely loved your story... It was actually one of the first that made me want to write my own fics... sorry I didn't review when I read it :(, but yeah. I hope you write something else soon! [besides the sequels... Lol]

I love your story. It rocks!Can't wait for the next chapter!