This was the story I was searching for all night?! It's still fresh in my mind after all these years. Damn you did some fine work on this!

I much preferred the O-Make to the sentimental epilogue ;)

Hah,loved the story and the omake, just finished rereading it..still good as the first time.

nothing else 2 say, bt gud gud story man

Sorry I didn't review 18 times but this story was too good to stop and to be honest I was just too lazy before lol. Anyway nice story, noticed some grammar and spelling mistakes but meh everyone has em I guess.

This is the first story of yours that actually made me tear up. I don't know what else to say other than keep on writing stories of this caliber. I would say that you would be a great novelist if I didn't get the feeling you would try to put three frags and two thermites in me for it. My only problem with this one is all the spelling errors. 9.9 out of 10 for that. Otherwise, just F***ing awesome. You really should consider writing a novel.

Really, really, really good. I love tis. It's not in the same style as a lot of your stories, but it's still realyl good. I just wish- ...the Omake is pure win. I'd shoot myself just so I could see that first hand. You sir are a magnificent writer, congradulations. If I had some way to reward yuo, I would.

I've been reading your stories for a long time now, and I have to say: You are one of the main people who have ins[ired me to be a writer. I'm not good, but I'm proud of myself because I try, you know? Let's see, there's you and there's Gunman, and... Well, honestly, that's it. You are awesome, and your stories are amazing. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

-Your biggest fan:

Al.

I love it...

Ahh had to be a sensible reason for the surviving mercs to off themselves and taking on Satan is an exellant one. :)

Having discovered you yesterday and spent too much time reading all your stuff I must congratulate you on on de-whine-ifying Shinji and making him a blood thirsty psyco in so many creative ways. Looking forwards to your future fic.

Wow, so enthralling. I'm not a huge fan of future stories with Shinji changing and such, but this was just damn good. Really, I couldn't stop: it's nearing midnight and I'd planned to catch up on sleep from six this afternoon. I know what you mean about reviews. I'd also cared perhaps too much about them before... It's only got 60 reviews but I'll tell you that I rank your "While You Were Sleeping" very fucking hihgly. By the way, I loved lines like this not just on the humor or cleverness level, but on many more:

“Some men had the Alamo in Texas, some men had a Bastogne in Belgium, we have a god-forsaken lump of dirt in the middle of no where.”

“It’s our god-forsaken lump of dirt sir,” Pierce said. “I plan to keep it that way for the next ten minutes.”

“See that you do,” Shinji said as he pressed the stock of his machinegun to his shoulder. “Here they come.”

Excellent story...hated that Shinji died...hated that Hikari betrayed him (in a sense)...hated that he and Asuka didn't end up together...but loved the story.

Inspired me to start a story of my own.

Well, what can I say... on one hand, this is a great fic and I loved it. On the other hand, I actually thought the original was better. Not that the rewrite's bad, like I said it was great, but it would have been better if you had kept the original up as well.

Sorry that I was being lazy and did not leave any reviews for the last few chapters. I really love your story, this is by far, my fav. Evangelion fic.

Yay for omake! :)

Regarding reviews: I generally review if I have something good to say, or something negative that will do any good. In the case of this story, it got to the point where I couldn't even remember what was happening from chapter to chapter because it was such a generic war story.

That's not a bash, just an observation. I say "generic" meaning that if you replaced any Eva character's names with random names I wouldn't notice. Especially Shinji. You replace him with the same generic badass in pretty much every fic.

So why do I keep reading your stuff? *shrug* I'm bored I guess. Anyway, if you're still having fun, keep writing. I just figured since you seemed like you wanted reviews/opinions I'd give you mine.

Very good story. I don't know what else to say. Then, your omake was so damn awesome. I'm waiting to see what you'll write next.

-Knight 2