Aw that's so sad. just when i thought there might be a happy ending ... estel has to be an idiot and make assumptions. ugh. another well-written story, i might add.

This was great. Continue it, please.

Now just wow that was moving and uh aragorn is a silly boy. Can't believe he left the room like that without finding out how Legolas felt. Liked how it was in his POV and we got to see how he felt. Hmm hope you do write a sequel cause I would love to know what Legolas was thinking and was going to say :).

yes yes a sequel a sequel !I hope this was just a misunderstandig between the two !

Oh, this was very well-written and very much needing a sequel (or even a series)! The first-person was wonderful for a young Estel, though we are left with no notion of Legolas' feelings (which, angst-wise, can be, "You're too young", to eventually being the happily-ever-after between A&L (that *I* love), or even be, "I feel the same way too!"). But, whichever way, do more, please!

I could hardly belive my eyes when I saw this morning the author alert, and could not wait to get home and read this. It is beautiful, even though it is quite different from your other stories. I like the way you have characterised 18 year old Estel, this certainty of being rejected - without having listened to the answer, the feeling of 'not being good enough'. Very well written, as all your other stories. Please continue this, as you said, this cries out for a follow-up.