Oh how lovely! I've missed so much not being on - and I didn't realize you'd posted something! This was an emotional and very sweet piece - and the contrast of Sam's feelings was truly palpable. Thank you so much for sharing this - keep writing! :D

SO SAD! Really good, I liked it!

I love how you analyze both Jack and Martin in Sam's life and the meaning each holds :) great work!

Awesome use of the tricycle! You are very good at describing atmosphere (physical/emotional).

Great characterization of Sam. I really enjoyed how you showed how she wanted to depend on Martin, when she really wanted Jack. Your were able to convay so much emotion in such a short piece. I love it.