Brilliant! Loved this. Is this the end or is there more?

Wow... Thats all i can say. This was aboslutely amazing! I never would have imagined this happening to poor obi wan but wow... You have a true gift with words. This new chapter to the life of Obi-Wan Kenobi has been a very intersting, amazing, mind boggeling, and more importantly heart breaking. The descriptions were just amazing! Nailed right on! Not much gets this author teary eyed ever but this got me on the brink of bawling like a little baby. This is just so absolutaley amazing! Beautiful job! Beautiful job!
little_china_girl22

Wow that was...depressing. I love it! :D

wow, emotional, great story. I love Obi being comforted after going through such an ordeal..whether he wants it or not, lol. Great story. I know it's been a few years, but was this all of the story, or had you planned more. If so, do you think you will finish it? I would love to read the rest if so. ~Obi's mom

I'm so glad you wrote this! While I was reading the first one, I wondered about Obi's captivity. This was really good! Nice job. :)

*jaw drops to floor* AH! I LOVE THIS! Alright, this is possibly the *best* Obi torture fic on *hugs* Love it!

-Elfpen

'Twas a very interesting fic. I like how Obi referred to Qui-Gon as 'Home', and Qui-Gon referred to Obi-wan as 'Light.'

Your story was so touching and poignant that I found myself crying through the majority of it. The intensity with which you portrayed Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon was excellent. The visuals in this story were captivating and almost surreal. Bravo for writing this wonderful story!

Well done! I thought you managed to portray Obi-Wan's emotional turmoil very well. I do think that his acceptance of his rescue moved a bit quick. If he had been in such a deplorable situation for so long, couldn't it have taken him longer to believe his master, no matter how close they were? Nevertheless, this was still an incredibly well written story, and I am constantly amazed at the quality work you produce.

Well I must say a part of me is glad that all of that was posted together so I didn't have to wait for each one, but now I'm wondering if this is the end of this story or are you continuing? Either way it is a great, emotional story and I really enjoyed it.

Aww, poor Obi-Wan, but safe now! That was great. This group of chapters really depicts Obi-Wan's traverse from captive to home again. Not to mention there was lots of great and touching mushiness. After all that time, it would be hard to believe. Wonderful and lovely, as always.

This is so good! Even if reading it for the second time ;) Great work! I still love these lines!

"Look at me, Obi-Wan." The words are deep, authoritative.

Something inside me has to obey, when my mind rages against it. His eyes are clear, gleaming emerald stone, remaining steady on me.

"If this weren’t real, I wouldn’t be feeling the rapture of seeing you again. And if this weren’t real, I wouldn’t be sitting at your side all these silent hours while you sleep, taking your hand when you look troubled, pulling up your blankets when you kick them down." He swallows and takes a breath, "And if all this wasn’t real, I wouldn’t be one step away from taking you in my arms and never letting you go…I wouldn’t be dead afraid that I might, somehow, lose you still."

No. No no no no no. This can’t be true. I know who my Master has become in my life, I know he has dwindled to that eye staring up from the dust of an old life that’s been destroyed. This…This…

Suddenly, I lunge forward into his arms, pressing my trembling cold face against his neck. The shock, the surprise, the disbelief—the joy, it rushes at me.

I search for the lingering doubt.

But, gods, it just isn’t there.

Only he is.

And these later on:

Careworn fingers brace my face, quivering. "I won't lose you again, Obi-Wan. I won't let you be h-hurt again. With all my power as a Master, and as a man, I will protect you "

I close my eyes and lean against his cheek. I'm tired to the bones, in the downy state of knowing sleep is to come, easy sleep. My response is almost reflexive, a sigh falling away from me, into the room's darkness. "I know, Master."

For a moment, I think I hear his shuddering breaths, the kind that choke back great sobs. But then I understand that I am weeping as well, the sound frail even against a backdrop of silence.

"Where have you been, my Padawan?" He murmurs. "Because I don't know where I've waited for you." He wipes the warm deluge from my eyes, I watch the sheen in his, "I don't want to know where I am, if you're not with me, my apprentice."

I can't describe how, but I manage to smile. It seems foreign to my face, nearly painful. A shattering of walls.

Master matches my smile with his own. It grips tenuous to him "It doesn't matter. It doesn't matter what has happened…as long as you're here now. A-As long as I don't have to wake to rooms…deserted by Light, it doesn't matter. You're home now, Obi-Wan." He trails his fingers down my braid, disheveled from months of neglect. "What else can matter?"

"Nothing." I answer before the question can sink in, before I register the words. I embrace him as tightly as my overtaxed muscles will allow, and breathe in Home. "Nothing."

SO SWET! [face_love] Gotta love Qui!

oh my god this is so good. it's creepy too man, i love it. please update as soon as possible. i need to know what happens.

The poor kid, it's so heart wrenching, and all the while he thinks it's Qui Gon, but atleast he's out...right? Wonderful chapter, short, but to the point.

This is great! Can't wait for more... Poor lil Obi... Continue soon, please! :)