And now, I shall bawl my eyes out..

D8 Very sad, but I could totally see Usopp reacting like this.

This story nearly made me cry :'(

But it was very beautiful and enjoyable to read! It was really good! :)

this is so amazing! *sobs* so sweet and sad. I can't help but love it 3 good work!

-is stabbed in the heart- Ah! This story is so, so, sad. D;

Don't write something happy! I LOVE DRAMA AND DEATH (well not so literally but you get the point) Please continue I hope you are going to make a long one next time. With loads of luffy suffering and dying mayby while Zoro's getting mad XD

aw. That was touching. short, I like it.

Short as it may have been, that story packed a punch. Brutal, ya know?

Dear God, I love your angst.

-cherrichik

(by now, you must have figured out that the girl with too many words can now only use a few. She's speechless.)

OMG! *dies* That was just- omg! ;_; You're absolutely brilliant you know that? ;_; It's so sad, but it's so well thought out for something so short. It gets right to the point so that it never bores the reader, and oh my- it's just that little cruel reality that makes it such a great fic. Wonderful work! (and all of your other works as well : D)

This makes me want to cry really badly. Meaning great job!

Like I read from another fic, dont think they are immortal.

Remember that.

Short, I prefer longer.

Not that angsty that people should injure you.

Sad tone.

Heli

OMG I'm going to die! I'm going to go crawl into a hole and wait for the sun to cross the heavens and blind my sadness away.

For some reason, I don't believe you.

~Dark

Ohh...*blubbers*

Oh my god, this was beautiful. It really was. It was sad and deep and jesus, it just freakin rocked.

Thanks for writing!

~Ivae