| Reviews for Bedside Chat at Grimmauld |
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   itscoralreef chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 hi |
| Crystallion12 chapter 1 . 1/26/2017 Hahahahhah! Oh, Molly would do that. XD Great work! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2015 don't corrupt poor innocent harry. he might get even more traumatized. |
| 042014 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 It's a really nice heart felt story |
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 5/13/2012 Not much action in this story, just talking, yet it was very interesting. Your writing kept me captivated from start to finish and I very much enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for writing and posting. |
| alix33 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 AW! |
| jhgufuihpuop chapter 1 . 3/31/2012 Enjoyed this! Sirius was really very sweet, with his smoothing Harry's hair and just sitting there with him, and Harry rolling over even though he was asleep. Thanks for this! |
| Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 11/24/2011 Beer and naked women? Sirius, don't you dare! If you even think about doing that, I will be the one strangling you with a shoestring. After I through pumpkin pie in your face and pour eggnog into your hair, of course! |
| Lizzie chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 Great job! It was just like in the books in a way! Awesome! |
| The-Girl-Who-Dreamed chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 loved it |
| vikky-leigh chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 those damn shoestrings... |
| Deanadelyon chapter 1 . 2/19/2011 Brilliant job. I love it- very nice, very plausible. Good. :) |
| Sheila Olive chapter 1 . 2/9/2011 I absolutely love this! You should have continued on! :) |
| blueskyes101 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010 It was sweet. (In the candy kind of sense of the word, not that it wasn't cool, too.) |
| Secret Storywriter chapter 1 . 12/23/2009 I like how it's a simple conversation and nothing too dramatic; that makes it a bearable one shot instead of having so much thrown at you. I love how Sirius keeps feeling Azkaban and how he has to shake those thoughts out of his head. You've really got the whole character of Sirius throughout the story, which I really commend. He is funny and childish, worrysome and caring, and dangerous and emotionally injured - you've brought all of these aspects into the story - well done. Now, your story was a bit confusing at times. I didn't understand if it was Remus or Sirius who had not been informed about certain aspects of Harry life. I understand why Harry wouldn't tell anyone his hardships, but I don't get why moony or padfoot WOULD NOT know about the horrible clothes Harry is given and all. Anyway, try giving your stories to a friend - who is familiar with Harry Potter - to see if they understand all the facts that you are saying in your story. Make sure your facts are correct before you post them! ) On the whole, I really loved this one shot and I would love to see you write more! I love how deep you can go in a oneshot and at the same time, how it is not overdramatic. By the way - nice ending. D (Try to reword it so it flows a bit more though, okay? cool.) |
