pity this seems to be long abandoned

is that it?

Excellent fic so far,

I hope there's a good reason why Tom's been so quiet this year. I mean one bombing where Hermione's parents where accidently at isn't much.

Also it isn't exactly clear where your in your frame of time. I know it's after februari third but other then that it could be May, a week before finals or even februari 28th.

Hope you'll update soon.

-Bukama

PS Was that wandless magic Harry used to deflect the bludger?

Nice fic so far,

Your chapter eight is suddenly cut of though it ends with:

'And together they walked back to the Gryffindor promptly H'

Bukama

I have enjoyed this story. Keep writing and posting.
DMP

i think your story is great keep writing i enjoy reading it thanks!

This is a really good story. Keep writing.

okay... i will continue reading this story. even though its H/H. i hate harry/ hermione. i love R/H and H/G but oh well...continues to read the story.

Very, good. I still think that you could use some more description and the chapters are pretty short. Overall it is good though you have quite a few typos. I like the twist w/Hermione and Harry getting together. The thing w/Grawp was good to.

Good chapter, I just started reading your story and i can't wait to read the next chapter.
~Hermione Chick

This is potentially a very story. I hope there will be more. I liked the twist w/Mr. Weasly being Minister. I also like HArry being a prefect and Hermione trying out for the team. When they are in transfiguration you said that they were all eager to change a stone into a dog having seen Vicktor Krum do it in their 4th year. I was Cedric Diggory who did that. Erm, you may like to include more about Harry's personal life. Overall it is a very good story. The writing style could use more description but it allright. at the end of the 8th chapter it says "He promptly H" what is that supposed to be?

ohh, wait, its 'severus' not snivillus, thats the marauders nickname for him. He /hates/ that name