So this story is back, huh? I'm glad. I really liked it, and I think the separate chapters add so much more to the story. Each couple gets their own moment to shine, you know? Instead of just shoving them all together they kind of have a feeling of privacy. I like it! Please keep writing,

Cheers,

the Lady Katherine

I have to say that I agree with prin69.
yeah! beka and rhade!

Very nice and emotional little story. I would perhaps wish for a longer one, but nevertheless... I really liked it. Somehow it pictures my wishes how everything should evolve after this episode. Thanks!

Aw...that was great! It was really cute, with them all watching the sunset. How much more romantic can you get? This was a great one-shot, but I think it could have been even better if you'd made it a little longer. I think it would have been amazing if you'd given each pair their own chapter and embellished on the development of their relationships. Even though it was a cute story, it was rather sudden. I hope you keep writing!
Cheers,
the Lady Katherine

yeah! beka and rhade!
the others were great to but
yeah! beka and rhade!